magicbookworm23

I will be updating my weaknesses soon and would love if you could give me some ideas

magicbookworm23

Thank you so much for the feed back I will definitely apply it
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MiraHane150

@magicbookworm23 Your doing great o far into the story, maybe focus more on the family bond or switch PoV but no matter it's still great.
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