A Lullaby of Steel & Secrecy has gotten past round 3 of the ONC!
Also, I did promise a quick inside look at my writing process to meet my weekly deadline... It kind of goes like this over the course of 5-7 days:
• Write the first half of the chapter.
• Second guess myself and my writing skill and go back and reread and tweak.
• Finish the chapter.
• Go back and reread to see if my characters' actions feel natural.
• Ask myself, did I write how they felt about xyz? Does the dialogue make sense? Do their reactions to said dialogue makes sense? Did I build up that little bit of lore well enough for it to make sense for the reader?
• Continue to ask myself do they feel grounded? Does the chapter's events flow or is it forced?
• Tweak, tweak, tweak.
• Then I do a quick scan for repetition.. my Achilles heel.
• Copy and paste into wattpad and read from there. (sometimes changing the layout from docs to wattpad and seeing it in a different font and size helps me see things I would not have seen when editing in docs only)
• More tweaking.
• Give myself a pep talk about it being a first draft and the important thing is to keep going and stop going back to try and edit... Developmental edits and the sorts can come AFTER I've finished the whole thing.
• Post.
With Love,
Miriam <3