Okay, so few major problems...
When I first started making "random stories", it made me realize that: being a writer or author is a lot harder than I thought it would've been... I understand why some abandoned their works or even their whole account... It made me realize that I'm completely unprepared, inexperienced, and absolutely down-right terrible at being a writer.
I have so many ideas that I personally believed that many would like. Yet. Executing those exciting and creative ideas was nearly impossible...
Writer's block. Whenever I continued to try and make a new chapter. I had a nagging feeling about this... I researched it on google where I eventually discovered that I might have writer's block... The reason I felt like that I DO MIGHT have writer's block is because of the words that I frequently use.
In my perspective: it was too bland and not immersive enough.
I also compare myself and my use of words to others. Even with others with inconsistent grammar. No matter what I do, my mind would often discourage me and when I'm not discouraged. It would make me think that it is not GOOD enough.
And so. I'm sorry. No, I'm not quitting. But It's gonna take more time to finish the next chapter. I'm very very sorry... I'll find a way somehow.
For now, entertain yourself with other stories that you can focus on completely.