MirrorMan20

@MirrorMan20 yah
            May the future be less sorrowful

@PatchyStory THANK YOU!!

No way!
             You have so much room to improve. And I’m not saying that to put you down! It is because you have potential and I’ve noticed how much work you put in to improving. With that you are already better than most. So don’t let anyone talk you down! Not even yourself ;)
            And I am happy to help.

@PatchyStory Your welcome, and Thank you as well for using the "conversation", it gives my brain the much needed results that my work isn't actually a complete failure! 

@MirrorMan20 glad i could help, and as long as you keep writting, i'll keep reading.

@MirrorMan20 You really poured your soul into this. And honestly. It motivated me to continue. My words are few not because I'm ungrateful, but speechless, you motivated me alot.
            
            Thank you raider, you're a pretty great author aside from Grammer issues. Your story? It may have grammar issues, but the main thing is that I understand it. And I'll still be waiting for more chapters in the near future. Your story made me speechless too. I'm really sorry for the lack of more better words I use, I really am.
            
            Still, raider, You helped me alot and gave me advices that I'll remember to engrave into my skull otherwise I'd smack myself for not engraving it.
            
            
            I'm very greatful, reassured, motivated, and most importantly. I'm joyful that you see potential in me despite the problems I had and the clear inexperience and poor attempts in trying to make it more detailed or engaging.
            
            
            But since you see a potential in me. I'll make sure to remind myself when I'm down in motivation: "There is still someone reading, I have to continue for them."
            
            
            
            Seriousness aside, you dropped this .

@MirrorMan20 look my friend, i'll be honest, it"@ not uncommon to think that there's some lack of potential when something you're putting yout passion on doesn't get recognize, it happend to me when i wrote my first book, "a way out of Marmolia" which was an original story, i don't remember how many chapters it had, just that onw friend read it without knowing it was me and called it awful, causing that i inmediatly delete the story, and it wasn't till i played Limbus Company that u truly decided to keep writting despite the critics.
            
            I'll tell you this, don't feel bad if your story don't get many reads, cause at the end of the day, most people that come here to read stories, are looking to something related to what they play or like, they rarely look for an original story if it isn't from big authors.
            
            And trust me, i do not force mysekf to read your story, i like the way you write , truly do; my idea of being helpful is to say the truth, as harsh as it may be, but i liked your style.
            
            It's not weird to feel some preassure when what you write doesn'r get the attention that we expected, but if we're only waiting for that attention, it will always come to a point, sooner or later when we don't want to write no more; heck, there were times where i was planning on stop writting "more than just a second chance" cause of it, but i truly got attached to my oc, and that caused for me to keep on going.
            
            Only advice i can give right now, is that you don't have to force yourself to write something you're not passionate about; take your time, and maybe start slow, and maybe make a story about something that you know will get more attention; i mean, most people that came to my story was probably just looking for a new Project Moom fanfic, not necesarily cause my story was to their liking.
            
            You have potential, i really think so, but doubting yourself won't help, if you wanna wrote something, wrire it for you rather than others, sooner or later, you'll see the results.