MisImagined

updated a new chap. hope you can have the time to see it. :) 

0wasp0

@TheBlitz Your story is great so far, you just need to develop your characters more- I can give you tips if you want. Your spelling could improve but so could everyones, so don't worry. Story goes by very quickly so you need to add more detail and finish the scenes (don't jump around too much).
          Keep writing it's good. =D