@ForeverWithLove Hello ForeverWithLove, This is Jaimi. I gave your story a looksie, and it's not bad. I have to admit, I'm not the best critic, Kaitlyn is much better with pointing out things, so I'll just say a little about what I liked. First, I like the names you picked, very nice, mostly because one is my name, just spelled differently. I feel special~. Also, PB&J is amazing, can't deny. I'm interested in finding out how this will turn out. I've already got my own ideas and thoughts on what gonna happen.