hi author , just completed manzil and must say you wrote the story so beautifully the characters have flaws, which make them real. All the bonds have their unique beauty and depth, for arnav arjun is his first child then a brother, the one in whose upbringing he was actively involved since his birth, that make arjun special out of the three
Maan was always a brother to him first, he didn't have to take his responsibility as their parents where their for it, after that he became the his child but then too in my pov maan is someone who is arnav's brother, friend and sounding board the age gap between them give arnav the right to punish him
Ansh is the baby of the family , the one who bought and always carried hope and light, before and after always, he is show as a child but he is really mature, he keeps his fear and darkness hidden while turning that to his mischief which brings light in house
The character which felt the most real was no doubt armaan, his portrayal is actual how a human mind works, anger for obvious reasons, fear for his dear ones, guilt everything makes him real
Tho no doubt the charter i connected to most was arjun
Really looking forward to the upcoming chapters of sequel, and i have a request please make sequel quite long to, i want to read scenes of arjun falling in love, his marriage and birth of arnav and them armaans child, i personally want arjun or armaan to have a daughter, want to see how arnav (if alive) and armaan handle arjun and ansh after having their own kids, hoping we will see it soon
YOU WROTE AN ABSOLUTE MASTERPIECE AUTHOR
can't wait to see more of it, update soon please
with lots of love
