Carinahdm
Okay, I just read your whole story at once and I'm just Freaked out. I loved it, it's wonderful from start to finish. That right and honorable side is all about Derek. I can imagine him really being that way with her. Please, you have to continue. I don't know, after the next chapter you promised, you could do a continuation with Grace in the last year of school, at the age of 18. SoI would put in the middle some flashbacks of how they two lived together during these three years and how the relationship evolved to become a relationship. It's just an idea, but I would love for you to think carefully. Before I forget, my English is not very good because my original language is Brazilian Portuguese. So there may be some things that don't make a lot of sense.
Carinahdm
I'm sorry for your loss. I can only imagine how difficult it must be. Glad my comment made you happy. I was also happy to know that. On continuation, take your time, rest and be safe. At some point, if you feel good about writing, you write. If not, leave it as it is already wonderful. Hugs.
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MissBiancaaa
@Carinahdm That makes me so happy to hear! You truly have no idea how much you've made my day, thank you. It was my original plan to finish it with a long epilogue to give some closure to their relationship, but a few months ago someone very close to me passed away and it made me lose motivation to write. I've been wanting to get back into writing, so this helps encourage me to give them the ending they deserve. Thanks for sticking around and commenting!
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