Miss Erotic

Um hi everyone❤️
          I just finished the very first chapter of my book.A Ride. Could you guys please take a moment,have a look and guide me about my writing ? It would mean the world to me. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/278164438?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=SrishtiSharma527&wp_originator

Hello, I'm shan. And I've been writing this Erotica book. It's name is Rade and I'd love if you could check it out. Please like, comment and review. I promise it's not that bad, except from one or grammar problems it is pretty okay. 
          
          Here is the link : 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/253894684?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=fang_howler3000&wp_originator=cjr%2FGQDMAS%2FbmKpj6z3gJqnqvFg35CZFc%2B%2FEd7HByiTVa5gYyb89jvJaAoG1d1dX3DHf58FbMd3%2Bq69yVqNPY5yROSdBXVNcMLxjMIIVnHopcRhaJk%2BqXHBiup0tqCAE
          
          Thank you ❤️

Holi

Read my story hehe

wat of girl x boy

good morning :) will you read my stories as well?