@ashlandlover she will destroy her brother in the next book and I will also try and explain more of her past. When I was writing the book I decided not to let the reader know how she was to destroy her brother because I wanted the story to sound believable. Like she would actually destroy him one day in the future. Thanks so much for the feedback I know I am going to enjoy writing the second book even more thanks again its been good to get a perspective on this story. :)
Well at the end it just ends lol and im confused how it relates to the beginning part... is that how she started? and i thought she was going to destroy her brother???? so im thinking there is going to another part to explain how she is going to do that lol
@ashlandlover Yes hopefully, can you please tell me how I can make it less confusing? It would be a lot of help thanks so much, having my first real folower so exciting!!!