Myst

Hi Myst! I see you have a sound opinions about other writer's story.  I am a new writer and  I would like to ask a favor from you. I need your opinion  about my book...  pleeease read it :) :).
             I think you can give me a sound advice I would really appreciate any opinion coming from you, whether its good or bad it will definitely help me a lot! Thank you!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/152723271-a%C3%B1o-luz-aparte-light-years-apart

Hello? Notice my fantasy work. Enjoy reading lalabs :*

Gusto  ko pong humingi ng tawad kasi pansamantalang ioonhold ko po ang The Hacker
          Dahil minumulto po ang phone ko nag tatype mag isa !! Di joke lang po nasira po ang screen hirap akong mag type  
          
          Don't worry di kayo  mabbtin  next update ko ..sorry po talaga                                    
           
          

Hi! Hilig mo bang magbasa ng nobelang may malalim na salita? Mga nobelang kagaya ng ILYSM1892? Try reading my finish Classic novel, Tuwing Takip Silim! Enjoy!
          http://my.w.tt/UiNb/TDldatfr1y