TheVickyGillies

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Thanks for the follow back! =)  By the way, I'm not one of those people who will follow just to gain a follower and then un-follow so... your kinda stuck with me, lol!

@MissPinkSherbert I love your writing voice because it's engaging and approachable! :) You can send me a mail at napolitanodaniel051@gmail.com. I hope to get a response from you on this, and I would really appreciate it if my request is granted. Thanks!

@MissPinkSherbert I really find your writing interesting and fascinating which also inspires me as well.. I just started writing and I love to do that in my free time but regardless I’m not as good as you are and I would love to have an interaction with you privately to be able to get some guidelines and ideas which will inspire me to be write and get better as well.
          I hope to get a response from you on this and I would really appreciate if my request if granted. Thanks 

Hi Vicky, I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your recent piece! Your writing style is captivating, and I love the way you develop your characters. I'd love to hear more about your inspiration for this story!

Hey guys! I've gone through the first 3 sections of my novel and edited it A LOT. It's a total rework. I like it a lot more now, and would really love it if you read it. Feel free to leave any feedback comments you like. Thank you so much! <3 https://www.wattpad.com/1474667237-freya-chapter-1-magic-fire

Coming across your profile on here and I just want to I don't mind us getting to know each other, sharing stories and more .if you don't mind please reply to this message thank you

Thank you so much for the follow 
          I would really appreciate it if you would check out my novel... Have a good rest of your day 

One of my favourite authors Florence Given recently said “Embarrassment is the price you pay to become absolutely brilliant at something.”
          
          So…anyone want to critique my novel and make me cringe? HA! I’m ready! I know it’s super cringy but we’ve all been there and this is Wattpad where mistakes can happen and are a good thing. Let me know what you think and I’ll do the same for you <3 <3 <3

"Woohoo, ready to take your clothes off ladies?" He looks darkly at me, a huge smile on his beautiful lips, his eyes boring into my soul.
          
          "Are you ready Lula?" I look at her with a shy as heck expression on my face. 
          
          We find the store and I immediately I worry about my tummy, it's not like the skinny girls at school and I have been shamed for years by my stepmom. When was the last time I ate? Oh yeah, this morning.
          
          "Hell yeah!" She says as she looks at the stunning suits in various colours and prints, she flips through them with speed until she grabs two, grabs my hand and leads me into the changing rooms.
          
          Axel moseys through the aisles, keeping an eye on me like a hunter stalking his prey in a field of bikinis. 
          
          "Girl he LIKES you! A LOT!" She blurts out as soon as she pulls closed the curtain.
          
          "What? No he doesn't." The thought makes me want to crawl into a small hole in the ground and dig my way to China. 
          
          "He doesn't even know me! How could he like me?" 
          
          "He wants to take you for a ride on his bone, BOAT, I meant boat." She says and I scoff.
          
          "But I'm sure when he gets to know you, he'll like you even more. Cos you're the sweetest." She says, booping me on the nose.
          
          "So put this on and don't make it hard for him - that's what she said - to get to know you. Show off your body! It's not summer for long. So make the most of it." She hands me a vintage black two piece, with a retro halter and ruched high waist. 
          
          "It makes my boobs look good." I admit. They've never looked this squished up and together. 
          
          "Dayum!" She says as her jaw drops. I do a little twirl and she is mesmerised.
          
          "I think I might be gay now." She tells me just to boost my ego a little more. 
          
          As we come out of the changing rooms, Axel is leaning up against the doorway, his smouldering eyes locked on mine.
          
          Did he hear everything we just said?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1476798211-freya-chapter-7