delusional_brat

Hi, I am a new writer on this platform I would appreciate it if you could review my story
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/385608750
          
          Cynthia
          "I want to love her till my lips go blue, till I am left craving oxygen, till I am left breathless. I want me to be her blanket when she feels cold, and she'll be my late-night snack when I am craving love." Ego Valentino a ruthless Mafia boss who is obsessed with Cynthia and wants to conquer her to be all his, was shocked and delighted when he gets to know that he is arranged into marriage with...

delusional_brat

Hi, I am a new writer on this platform I would appreciate it if you could review my story
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/385608750
          
          Cynthia
          "I want to love her till my lips go blue, till I am left craving oxygen, till I am left breathless. I want me to be her blanket when she feels cold, and she'll be my late-night snack when I am craving love." Ego Valentino a ruthless Mafia boss who is obsessed with Cynthia and wants to conquer her to be all his, was shocked and delighted when he gets to know that he is arranged into marriage with...
          
          Cynthia

The-Scrivener

Thanks MissSeraph   for putting  I'm a Cyborg's Pet  on to your reading list. OK that's a bit odd thanking you for that but it feels like a real vote of confidence  and I can't tell you how good that feels. but as new authors still get a real buzz each and every time someone discovers our work. Please enjoy the book. You're a wonderful person and it's lovely to have you as a reader. 
           
           Hugs RK+Reb