scarlerdespair_

maganda sana story but it felt like it was rushed. sobrang bilis ng turn of events and there are times na ang cringe ng batuhan ng dialogues ng mga characters. parang hindi na napag-isipan nang mabuti kase minadali yung story. 
          
          concept - 8/10
          plot - 9/10
          writing style - 6/10
          
          kudos, author! hoping for improvement. i know my potential ka :)

jessapows

@scarlerdespair_ I thought I was the only one who noticed..but overall, it's still a chef kiss for me hehe
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scarlerdespair_

i followed u btw because i know you would really do great someday!!
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WinterJoy21

15/10, your story is great po. It has potential, kelangan lang talaga i-edit yung ilang part po na may typo and some wrong grammars. Nevertheless, your story is one of those stories na worth it basahin. Goodluck to your journey po as a new author♡

Miss_Crescentia

@WinterJoy21 Hello! Sobrang late ng reply, but thank you so much for the feedback.
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