Miss_Jane_Doe

@ASamuel23 Generation was good, but I do have a couple edits that I would make if I were you:
          	1) check your use of there and their
          	2) don't forget to add an 's to possessives
          	Really, grammar is the main thing that I would focus on.
          	PS: I got the vibe of your work having a "rap flow," was I right?
          	Hope this was helpful:)

samuelshouseofart

@Miss_Jane_Doe thank you..  and hopefully we can follow each other artistic career.
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samuelshouseofart

@Miss_Jane_Doe greatly appreciated lol and as far as edited I have a editor but that's my creativity in my poetry a total disregard for Grammer but I'm glad that you got the message!..
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Miss_Jane_Doe

@ASamuel23 Generation was good, but I do have a couple edits that I would make if I were you:
          1) check your use of there and their
          2) don't forget to add an 's to possessives
          Really, grammar is the main thing that I would focus on.
          PS: I got the vibe of your work having a "rap flow," was I right?
          Hope this was helpful:)

samuelshouseofart

@Miss_Jane_Doe thank you..  and hopefully we can follow each other artistic career.
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samuelshouseofart

@Miss_Jane_Doe greatly appreciated lol and as far as edited I have a editor but that's my creativity in my poetry a total disregard for Grammer but I'm glad that you got the message!..
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