Miss Marbles

Hey sammi would you mind checking out my novel
          The Girl Who Never Had A Chance 
          I need feedback votes and comments.
          Earlier i told you that you are a good writer
          So pls can you tell me how my novel is? 
          Can you please vote..or comment or promote my novel??
          Like you i also need some motivation so please help me out 

Hey i just loved ur part in beside you
          You are a great writer no doubt.. ;)
          So wish u luck for ur future :)