@Miss_Sweetie17
Happy 1 Year, You Are The Dream story!
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1. Hi! I have been correcting the errors I found through these pages. But then, I saw that you muted my account and that's not how a writer should be. Be open to corrections and let other people criticize your work. That's how writers grow and learn- and clearly, you're doing it wrong.
I hope you take this seriously as you write. Otherwise, stop yourself from doing so.
There are a lot of websites available that allows you construct your sentences right. Be sure to use them first.
2. Girl, tinatama ka lang naman bakit ka nagmumute? Ayaw mo 'yon para magkaroon ka ng improvements? Hindi mo talaga maiiwasan ang maseselang readers. If ever na gusto mo maging maayos ang flow ng story mo at structure, mag-open ka for critiques. Hindi 'yung imumute mo 'yung mga readers mo. Gusto lang naman namin itama ang mispelled words mo, 'no. Nagbibigay lang kami ng opinion at kung ano 'yung na-observe namin sa story. Top 1 ka, right? Sana minsan sumang-ayon ka rin sa sarili mong pagkakamali. Ikaw na nga nagsabi na huwag aral ng aral sa facebook based sa thread mo about honor students. Sana maintindihan mo rin na kapag magsusulat ka ng novel, 'wag kang sulat lang ng sulat.
Former ssg ka pa naman tapos hindi mo pinapansin ang opinions ng iba.
@Ginoo_01 I also think that corrections, in general, doesn't need anyone's opinion. I simply pointed out what I saw wrong. She took it negatively and muted my account. If you do not want corrections, critiques and well constructed sentences, well, you do you. But I will not stop 'cause I am solely stating facts here and helping others see their error. It is for their improvement too. See, that's my whole point. Thank you.
Hi, @Criticism101 I think you are right about correcting someone if they make mistakes. However, the manner in which you correct them is incorrect. You are tackling her personal events in life and comparing them to what you have observed and without knowing her opinion about your corrections. I think if you knew her in real life, you would be amaze at her compassion for writing. She is the type of sweet, beautiful, loving girl that has fallen in love with writing. Sometimes the corrections are not we need. Sometimes it is the heart of the author that we really need to see. I think that with that observation, the real magic works. Lastly, if I had to choose between perfect sentences over romantic sentences, I would choose the romantic one. It is because it comes from the heart, not in the mind. Have a wonderful day! Godbless.
@PaulineMarieBeringue Might as well tell you that you shouldn't start sentences with the word "and" lol.
Narito ang Kabanata 2 ng Our Dreams! Enjoy Reading!
I just published "Kabanata 2" of my story "OUR DREAMS". https://www.wattpad.com/1126603543?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Crissa_Luna&wp_originator=RuRReJQXasS%2FvPPNPVumR2jOYkMaXUEQ0KwdYOlBLHkmMCzSA%2F86dM4WG8p14mpucXad6npQm7expWaigiPru4SO7xnnlhIFfMpk34ODR4Cxv9EKrNb2zdIt%2BHH%2BNHbA
CHAPTER 32 IS UP! GOOD AFTERNOON!
I just published "Chapter 32- LEAVING" of my story "THE BEST OF ME". https://www.wattpad.com/1114798069?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Crissa_Luna&wp_originator=uSjhO1u4eb0QHhx0M17cMccakbgl5XAkLZh42ZeVyn53sl9TYG3F3ZII1yBH2Xyvf6TmRXgazrn%2Bn8zuJxMjF6jH4KmBx61a0XgKNOTr9dvi6K3wzSOzK9d9i23Yviua
Chapter 31 is up! Konting kembot na lang din at malapit na tayo sa finish line! Thank you for supporting my story! I love you guys!
I just published "CHAPTER 31- BROKEN FAMILY" of my story "THE BEST OF ME". https://www.wattpad.com/1112264196?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Crissa_Luna&wp_originator=%2Fs1cqiZs%2Fwxus1wEXCMTzsov2vpW07aZta19xK62%2FVZtfsC2wP4F5tZ%2B%2B0SivV5tDBSdwWYG%2FtykU%2BUv8RA7do7k1Eh2uKyQmoQxTC5gEf6J23Jpzbmcy%2BDnIjL24iK3
Hello! Malapit na tayo sa epilogue ng THE BEST OF ME and I just wanna say thank you for supporting me! I have a second story entitled: OUR DREAMS,sana suportahan niyo! Thank you and Godbless!
Chapter 20- SPOKEN POETRY is up! And FYI, SPOKEN POETRY that included in my story is my own work. Please, don't plagiarize.
Plagiarism is a Crime.
Thank you and God bless!
I just published "Chapter 20- SPOKEN POETRY" of my story "The Best Of Me". https://www.wattpad.com/1047750563?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Crissa_Luna&wp_originator=v%2FljSDKDdH2BH02rq04DVOnZQmTlI9UOWqKyyKAMg21Jig8BceO%2FZzqrBYvtFEnO0WvkcC3NFRa5hLjFFBZix%2FrCkE8nJRDyLGGt7EzmRtuGTdslqpW6vBSRocjgmCjS
GOOD AFTERNOON! CHAPTER 18 IS UP! THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING MY STORY,HOPE YOU'LL HAVE A DAY! KEEP SAFE AND GOD BLESS!
I just published "CHAPTER 18-UNFORGETTABLE" of my story "The Best Of Me". https://www.wattpad.com/1039332798?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Crissa_Luna&wp_originator=YeAkLaTOhPyU%2Fd2RPk1sjThcKpMJ%2FpnjNXodYQvwDJ7ThJnHOPb0%2F%2Bb58DkDShyE2FKq4VNScOQ8ig8B4cI4JhoogiLMgkxlWqeRSP8nu7wD3gFyX6pEe5ACgzrsUhHW
Chapter 17 is up! Please do support to my story, thank you and God bless you all!
I just published "CHAPTER 17-THIRD YEAR" of my story "The Best Of Me". https://www.wattpad.com/1038972035?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Crissa_Luna&wp_originator=0OPqtgx44FIEeVgP0xthSogYJbOBiiD4UUn6O4XbPbX4YID082LhJWkNJz07uY%2FG4dIbmNMcrnA4m%2BbF%2F10N2LIv4LjYMuKVI71rtq6tGttdt9ULdMZqwvU7fUakU0vQ
Good day! Chapter 16 is up. Thank you for supporting me and my story! Keep safe and God bless!
I just published "CHAPTER 16- BACK TO REALITY" of my story "The Best Of Me". https://www.wattpad.com/1030498281?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Crissa_Luna&wp_originator=KHCPLaK0wfObZ4t6Po8lbuEq%2Fr6glg6GfRYAsHOCxq8Y8HSowBo0j0%2BKNapaWwzixOm5kwpSUQerIDJeF80l37WFpVmBFQcGuEI4F8aoKSWdWabvvTuWxZO%2B%2BKt9y4sq