LustfulNarcissist
hey kitty girly your story is great , give good titles for each chapter and make it a bit longer lol unless you are going for short story... it took me 2minutes per chap :)) overall it was a good slice of life experience for me.. you can try my story as well and provide me genuine reviews
LustfulNarcissist
no worries , you are doing quite great as a young writer, am 17 now but i still dont think am that good without using grammarly and other tools to enhance my language as english isn't also my first language lol
Misskitty1316
@LustfulNarcissist yeah , I know the first few chapters are really short , I tried to make other chapters long .