Hey... it was an awesome story ... l m glad l found it... it was truly beautiful and lovely ❤...
But l think you can add some more stuff live they really dating and the people reaction to it....
Also mainly... they didn't have their dance, like it was ruined because of jealousy but still now they can have couple dance ryt...
But overall the story was awesome... it would be great if u continue it...
(Hope l didn't say anything wrong to you)
Good luck...
Waiting for the continuation
OR
Even more stories like these...❤