Chasm

I know that you're in need of some help in your story. And if you want to improve just give it a try in my critique shop. 
          
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          The following are the parts that I will critique in your story.
          
          Outer Parts:
          
          ☑ Title
          
          ☑ Book Cover
          
          ☑ Blurb
          
          
          Inner Parts:
          
          ☑ Plot:
              ☑ Exposition
              ☑ Conflict
              ☑ Conclusion
              ☑ Phasing
          
          ☑ Narration:
              ☑ Spelling and Grammar
              ☑ Show vs. Tell
              ☑ Choice of words
              ☑ Style
              ☑ POV
          
          ☑ Characters:
              ☑ Character Development
              ☑ Dialogue
          
          ☑ Strengths and Weaknesses

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