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This seems to be a good story and I know English is not your native language so I'll just suggest that you consider having someone who has a decent knowledge read through and proof then edit this story. I've read about one hundred of these FF and there are a few that I've recommended this be done. I believe it will be a fantastic story more enjoyable once done and there aren't so many errors that has the reader tracing there steps. Best of luck!