MisterPenguin5963

Okay okay, so some of you probably noticed that the entire Jeff The Killer rewrite fanfic of Neesha Nickelson's fanfic "Insanity" has disappeared and if you can see it, it's a draft and only I can see it. Basically, the reason for that is because I feel like it could have been better. Not only that, the schoolyear's getting closer and closer to ending and I should have ACTUAL time for writing more than drafting. I want this to be good. Also, I believe that I was civil before (although I could have handled it better) but I guess I'd still like to say that I hope the original author of the fanfiction builds up her skills and writes again. Quitting is never something you should do. I'm sorry that the reviews are upsetting her though. 
          	
          	TLDR: Nah, I'm not quitting the book, no way! I've had the ideas buzzing in my head for nearly a year and I've been making a hell of a lot of progress since Saturday morning (it's currently Sunday afternoon in my area), there's just going to be some revamping. When it goes back up, hopefully in the next week or so, I should also have a cover be done as I now take a photoshop class and therefore I can make an image to use as a cover. As for why I never had one before, I'm an artist myself and I don't feel like I should be using anybody's artwork that isn't mine, even if I do get permission.  
          	
          	(Speaking of art, I've also got an art account on Instagram: lord_of_the_scribbleheads) 
          	
          	See you soon! 
          	-M.P

MisterPenguin5963

My gosh, where are my brain cells?! Just to clarify, when I said: "...and if you can see it, it's a draft and only I can see it." I meant that I'm not sure if you can see if the story even exists or not, I'm assuming that you see it's there but can't see any of the actual writing for it.  This is what I mean about me revising my stuff... yikes.
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MisterPenguin5963

Okay okay, so some of you probably noticed that the entire Jeff The Killer rewrite fanfic of Neesha Nickelson's fanfic "Insanity" has disappeared and if you can see it, it's a draft and only I can see it. Basically, the reason for that is because I feel like it could have been better. Not only that, the schoolyear's getting closer and closer to ending and I should have ACTUAL time for writing more than drafting. I want this to be good. Also, I believe that I was civil before (although I could have handled it better) but I guess I'd still like to say that I hope the original author of the fanfiction builds up her skills and writes again. Quitting is never something you should do. I'm sorry that the reviews are upsetting her though. 
          
          TLDR: Nah, I'm not quitting the book, no way! I've had the ideas buzzing in my head for nearly a year and I've been making a hell of a lot of progress since Saturday morning (it's currently Sunday afternoon in my area), there's just going to be some revamping. When it goes back up, hopefully in the next week or so, I should also have a cover be done as I now take a photoshop class and therefore I can make an image to use as a cover. As for why I never had one before, I'm an artist myself and I don't feel like I should be using anybody's artwork that isn't mine, even if I do get permission.  
          
          (Speaking of art, I've also got an art account on Instagram: lord_of_the_scribbleheads) 
          
          See you soon! 
          -M.P

MisterPenguin5963

My gosh, where are my brain cells?! Just to clarify, when I said: "...and if you can see it, it's a draft and only I can see it." I meant that I'm not sure if you can see if the story even exists or not, I'm assuming that you see it's there but can't see any of the actual writing for it.  This is what I mean about me revising my stuff... yikes.
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Neeshanickleson98

Well it was for a contest so I HAD to write it within a month. I know it’s a shitty book I don’t need other people to tell me that I’ve already had a rough time with all of the bashing and the hate videos and hate comments. I basically at one point trashed all of my writings. I honestly don’t think I’ll write again.

Neeshanickleson98

Everyone has different styles of writing and it’s just the way I wanted it written

MisterPenguin5963

@Neeshanickleson98 
            Okay, just saw this now. Wonder is a good movie, still, just not as good as it could of been. Just some minor things that sort of came undone and don't take away too much, and could of made if a little stronger.
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Neeshanickleson98

@MisterPenguin5963 and wonder was a really good movie. Thanks for your advice and all but im done talking to you. I’ve had enough of the bashing. Good luck with your story....
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Neeshanickleson98

It’s about two kids who get stranded on an island and they have to survive. It’s kind of mainstream but I feel like I’ve got more of a grasp on survival more than creepypasta. And it’s kind of difficult to write a set amount of words and pages in a month which is what I did for my first book.

MisterPenguin5963

@Neeshanickleson98 Why was the first Jeff book written the way it was?
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Neeshanickleson98

Hehe funny story actually I was just googling myself and found it through the searching. I’m glad you liked the way I wrote most people didn’t as some of the YouTube videos have said but I’m now twenty years old and am working on a new story. I’ve really enjoyed reading yours so far. Keep up the great work!

MisterPenguin5963

@Neeshanickleson98 Yeah, the way you wrote back then was definitely not really like, too educated(?), it was kind of willy-nilly and while it wasn't the best, again it really gave me an idea as to what I could do with this story. I'm actually on a school break because it's regents week and... well, I got no regents and hardly any homework for once. Also, a new story? What's that one about? 
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Neeshanickleson98

Hi there! I love your rewrite of my book! It makes me see how much of a horrible author I was but I wrote those books at the age of fifteen and I had a month to do it and it was kind of hard lol. Thank so for supporting and buying the book (if you did that is)

MisterPenguin5963

@Neeshanickleson98 Whoa, you're still active here??? How'd you find this? 
            
            Okay okay aside from that, I hope you still write, you definitely woulda improved by now. I actually started this when I was fourteen and the plan was to finish it in about a month like you, but... summer, summer homework, and then school started, yeah... now I just sort of occasionally edit and my birthday passed so now I'm the one who's fifteen, lol. I still haven't forgotten about it though and I have the whole story outlined from when I was starting this up in the summer. Thanks for noticing this! Even though it's short as of right now. I didn't buy the book but I have watched people read it out. Pretty often since I have to reference so much. I'm kind of glad the original was the way it was, because... let me just say that the idea of childish writing, bad decisions, justifying murder and not enough development of anything going on is kind of going to be a "theme" in this.  
            
            Anyways, thanks again, pretty cool that you noticed this! 
            
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