Mitmite2

So. I've been thinking about something that bothered me quite a bit. A certain Jaune arc story here that was about Jaune being a sort of dragon hybrid that somehow have the two brother gods fall in love with him. I remember it very vividly. I was wondering if anyone remembers that? I'm probably crazy but i swear i remember a story like that.

Mitmite2

Am i crazy?
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Mitmite2

Or a story about how Jaune was transported to the world of MHA and is an omega verse that Jaune is an omega and is in a relationship with All might.
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Mitmite2

So. I've been thinking about something that bothered me quite a bit. A certain Jaune arc story here that was about Jaune being a sort of dragon hybrid that somehow have the two brother gods fall in love with him. I remember it very vividly. I was wondering if anyone remembers that? I'm probably crazy but i swear i remember a story like that.

Mitmite2

Am i crazy?
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Mitmite2

Or a story about how Jaune was transported to the world of MHA and is an omega verse that Jaune is an omega and is in a relationship with All might.
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DannyThackery

Thanks for the vote on jaune the world tree human 

Mitmite2

@DannyThackery Alright then I'll give it a look.
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Mitmite2

@DannyThackery It's the Harry Potter one right?
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Mitmite2

You know someone told me the most biggest worries you have should be taken with a clear and open mind and with confidence. In which I would have agreed if I haven't lost my wallet and started to panic and I felt like I was so dying. After that happened and I found my wallet which was in side my closet.
          
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DestinyWritesfics

Hey dude want me to beta proof read spelling for you.

Mitmite2

@DestinyWritesfics  Ahh yeah you see I tend to not take the book seriously. Usually, when it comes to fanfics I don't take it seriously cause at the end of the day it's just fiction. However, that's off-topic yeah I see those errors and usually, they slip by me I'll admit.
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DestinyWritesfics

@Mitmite2 I noticed immediately a few times where you missed out a capital letter at the start of a sentence. If I looked more in depth into it I might be able to find a plethora of grammar suicide bit I'm too tired at the moment. Also your book is lacking punctuation such as commas in places where they would be appropriate. I am by no means saying the book is bad, just saying the presentation needs a rework.
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