MitthuKittu

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Hey Ritisha. I am Ritvik and I am a designer. I have gone through the summary of your story, Mall of Horrors, and it seems very interesting. I really appreciate your efforts, but I believe you need a good cover for your art. I have designed one for yours. Don't worry I won't charge anything, I just love doing it. If you are okay, I can share it with you, though I don't know how. Thanks, and Good Luck, and don't stop writing!

Ashes_and_Red

Hi! Your story was really good, and i just have one suggestion... i feel like it was very short and a longer and fleshed out version of the story would give more perspective to the individual characters and their motives. Like for example showing tanya's pov and why she cheated, aarav's love for tanya and why he did what he did, some secret plot twists (like the psycho turns out to be the boy she cheated with) and more obstacles for aarav and in general making the characters more gray rather than black and white. Otherwise it was a rlly good story!

Ashes_and_Red

@Ashes_and_Red great! Looking forward to it!
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MitthuKittu

@Ashes_and_Red Thanks, I am not used to writing horror so I don't know what would be perfect but I will try to improve in the third part.
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Ashes_and_Red

@Ashes_and_Red hey your second story is great too!! But it seemed a bit too uneventful .... like if there could be a jumpscare or smth in the last chapter too, it would be perfect
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