THEUndertaker333

Hi I was just wondering if there is anything I could do to improve my High&low story

MiyazakiKatsumi

@Reaper1916 You welcome ... Alright, I understands.
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THEUndertaker333

@MiyazakiKatsumi Thank you very much. Ignore the notifications if it says I updated my book today.
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MiyazakiKatsumi

@Reaper1916 Hey, I think you should write the story in separated paragraph and also highlight the conversation because it have long paragraph. And so people don't get confused when read.
            
            I also would like the main character INEI to have much more in the story because it very few of it. But other than that, every thing look perfect and very interesting to read. I look forward to read your next chapter.
            
            I also hoping that you can update the story as much as you can, but don't exhausted your self too much. THANK YOU FOR THE HARDWORK ... LUV U & THE STORY.
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