Miyuri myr

Hi I'm a new follower I have read the manhwa and I loved it. I'm also an aspiring author and I would like some advise on my recent works,p whenever your less busy pls feel free to check my work,thank u in advance
          

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Hello I'm your new follower I'm currently reading your works, into the light once again I'm waiting for the next chapter.