Commander800

Question when are you going to update y/n is our king

MlgRick

@ Commander800  i decide to postpone it to end of the month since I kinda out of idea. 
            I'm thinking of doing a reboot because I write the ghouls come out too early or just brainstorming to see how to explain why the ghouls attack early than original timeline
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thistletonvanessa

          Hi  MlgRick,
          
          Your words already carry magic, the kind that lingers after the last page.
          What I’d love to offer isn’t a rewrite, but a gentle polish: a way to help your story breathe even deeper and reach the readers who are waiting to feel exactly what you’ve created.
          
          I call it Story Profile Optimization. Think of it as a conversation with your book’s heartbeat. Together we can:
          
          1. uncover hidden layers that make characters unforgettable,
          
          2. shape pacing so every chapter leaves a quiet echo,
          
          3. Highlight the themes that resonate long after the cover closes.
          
          It’s not about changing your voice; it’s about amplifying it so the right readers can hear it clearly, powerfully, and at the perfect moment.
          
          If this sparks something, I’d love to share a short sample of what this process can reveal for your book. 
          
          We can chat more here: thistletonvanessa@gmail.com
          
          Warmly,
          Vanessa