Guys help me decide a future story (all gonna be gip oc). 1- oc is hockey player, 2- oc is a actor 3- oc is a boxer 4- your choice comment the number along with a idea or a movie to add in.
Hi, I just read your recent chapter and I like the direction you're taking with your main character.
I noticed a few areas where the pacing could be stronger to keep readers more engaged, especially in the middle section.
If you're open to it, I can share a few quick insights that could really elevate the flow of your story.