Mmntyjm-20

LMK what other book i should continue on (other than the ftwd one)

Makizenin6988

@Mmntyjm-20 Maybe your lost in space book or your marvel book danger.
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BirdwoodHelen

Hi, I just read your recent chapter and I like the direction you're taking with your main character.
          
          I noticed a few areas where the pacing could be stronger to keep readers more engaged, especially in the middle section.
          
          If you're open to it, I can share a few quick insights that could really elevate the flow of your story.