Mmntyjm-20

next book 1- Apocolypse 2- sports 3- rodeo 4- imagines

BirdwoodHelen

Hi, I just read your recent chapter and I like the direction you're taking with your main character.
          
          I noticed a few areas where the pacing could be stronger to keep readers more engaged, especially in the middle section.
          
          If you're open to it, I can share a few quick insights that could really elevate the flow of your story.