Mogitin

My 1st pass of revisions has been going well.
          	
          	I'm about halfway through the Hildebrandt Arc at this point. 
          	
          	My writing definitely improved as I've written cause I've had to edit less and the amount of detail I wanted to add to scenes felt few and far between. 
          	
          	I do have a filler chapter in mind that I might either add to the end of the book or in the 3rd part of Hildebrandt.
          	
          	idk I just wanna write some extra chapters.

Mogitin

My 1st pass of revisions has been going well.
          
          I'm about halfway through the Hildebrandt Arc at this point. 
          
          My writing definitely improved as I've written cause I've had to edit less and the amount of detail I wanted to add to scenes felt few and far between. 
          
          I do have a filler chapter in mind that I might either add to the end of the book or in the 3rd part of Hildebrandt.
          
          idk I just wanna write some extra chapters.

Mogitin

I've been making major revisions to school bomber arc. 
          
          Its a weak arc that i feel definitely needed some fine tuning. I have a more clear idea of what I wanted the theme of the arc to point out and the tone I wrote for it initailly felt all sorts of OFF to me. cause the subject matter is bleak and grim but the way I write it feels like its not taken seriously like how it should be. so I re-wrote it to have more of a serious tone.

Mogitin

Violet Eclipse Book One Has been finished. I'm gonna keep re-editing and improving what about it I feel needs tweaked. But this is the first draft.

Doodleboy565

@Mogitin Congrats on finishing the first book! That’s a pretty big achievement, so you should be proud of all the work you’ve done so far. I’ll try to get caught up as soon as I can. It’s been a while since I checked it out. 
            Haven’t been able to write very much lately, but my hope is to finish up the first book in my Spell Casters series before the years ends, hopefully 
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ashiieera

hello i am new here . and im creating my  own new  story i have a little request could you review if it was good ? 

Mogitin

@Agashiiee Hey hows it going, good writing. 
            
            On a surface level just from reading a few paragraphs, your work has alot of spelling and grammatical errors. its good to go through and triple check for errors. chatgpt can even assist with gramatical cleanup. though be careful its not foolproof.
            
            Don't beat yourself up about these kinds of errors. my work is riddled with them, and its part of the process of creating a story on this platform freehand without editorial staff.
            
            Will follow, and hope to see more of your work in the future. 
            
            -m0gs
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Mogitin

I am delaying Chapter 21, 22, and 23.
          
          YES. Chapter 21. is so damn big that i had to split it into 3 parts.
          
          I expected this considering that it is climax and resolution to Violet Eclipse's largest arc.
          
          I've been writing VE for damn near a full year now, and this has been quite the Journey. I'm also looking to go back through the whole book and possibly remaster and change what I dont like about it. A second draft of sorts before i send it off to editers than look for publishers.

Mogitin

Treat this post as a PSA.
          
          I've been getting alot of messages from people or bots. Asking me to email them or talk about something via email.
          
          Reader please proceed with caution when interacting with these individuals. Especially after they praise your writing or story.
          
          This kind of fluff is almost always a scam, leads to nothing or they are trying to get you to pay them for something. They are not your friends, they aren't looking for someone to collab with. They jusy want your money. Thats it.
          
          Once again proceed with caution.
          
          The more broken their english is. The higher likelyhood that they are running a scam.