Mogitin

New Chapter has been inserted into Act 2 of the Hildebrandt Arc. this is a canon Chapter called Donny Giovanni. 
          	
          	if you are interested I implore you all to take a read.

Notyofav_Period09

hi are you intrested in doing a R4R C4C V4V? 
          my book is called MY SINNER if you are intrested in a dark romance mature love story between Reid and Lorelia. 
          I am not one of those who just swipe in your book and vote comment i love to read. lol. 
          
          lmk. 
          and please do tell me which one to read of yours 
          show love and i will do the same thanks.

Mogitin

@TotheExtreme09 yeah thats fine lemme take a look
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Notyofav_Period09

@Mogitin okay perfect i have  another book that is called its always summer its a book like the summer i turned pretty. it only has kissing thats about it... its a work in progress btw
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Mogitin

@TotheExtreme09 im not much of a MATURE work reader. but thank u for the offer.
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Mogitin

I'm gonna try to release a new chapter this Tuesday.
          
          its an extra chapter, which will take the place of Chapter/Part 11. Every chapter proceeding that will be bumped a number forward.
          
          Initially this chapter was going to be filler, but I decided to slide it into the book as a canon chapter. Though it is mostly padding and character interactions, I hope those who want to spend time with my characters find themselves to like it. 
          
          Part 11 | Volleyball 
          
          Releases tommorrow.

Mogitin

My 1st pass of revisions has been going well.
          
          I'm about halfway through the Hildebrandt Arc at this point. 
          
          My writing definitely improved as I've written cause I've had to edit less and the amount of detail I wanted to add to scenes felt few and far between. 
          
          I do have a filler chapter in mind that I might either add to the end of the book or in the 3rd part of Hildebrandt.
          
          idk I just wanna write some extra chapters.

Mogitin

I've been making major revisions to school bomber arc. 
          
          Its a weak arc that i feel definitely needed some fine tuning. I have a more clear idea of what I wanted the theme of the arc to point out and the tone I wrote for it initailly felt all sorts of OFF to me. cause the subject matter is bleak and grim but the way I write it feels like its not taken seriously like how it should be. so I re-wrote it to have more of a serious tone.

Mogitin

Violet Eclipse Book One Has been finished. I'm gonna keep re-editing and improving what about it I feel needs tweaked. But this is the first draft.

Doodleboy565

@Mogitin Congrats on finishing the first book! That’s a pretty big achievement, so you should be proud of all the work you’ve done so far. I’ll try to get caught up as soon as I can. It’s been a while since I checked it out. 
            Haven’t been able to write very much lately, but my hope is to finish up the first book in my Spell Casters series before the years ends, hopefully 
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ashiieera

hello i am new here . and im creating my  own new  story i have a little request could you review if it was good ? 

Mogitin

@Agashiiee Hey hows it going, good writing. 
            
            On a surface level just from reading a few paragraphs, your work has alot of spelling and grammatical errors. its good to go through and triple check for errors. chatgpt can even assist with gramatical cleanup. though be careful its not foolproof.
            
            Don't beat yourself up about these kinds of errors. my work is riddled with them, and its part of the process of creating a story on this platform freehand without editorial staff.
            
            Will follow, and hope to see more of your work in the future. 
            
            -m0gs
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