Hello there, yes its been a while, well a few weeks but anyways, after reading the comment u posted on my TPDKDIFWAVS?! Aka (the previous demon kings daughter is friends with a vampires sacrifice) and also looking through the paragraph structure in the first and up coming second chapter i was wondering if twenty lines would be enough so people could comment. Im sorry if its out of the blue but after looking at ur comment i started to change most of the paragraph structures to 20 if not 23/4 lines each.
I hope i didnt bother u if u were asleep or u were busy as i was hoping for ur opinon. Sorry again.