Hi! I really like your writing, you have such a natural talent and your stories always pull me in. I just wanted to give a bit of feedback: sometimes there are a lot inconsistencies or repeated details that can be a little distracting while reading.
For example, there might be a scene where two characters are sitting on the sand at the beach, and then suddenly they’re in a park. Things like that happened many times. It might just be from forgetting earlier parts of the story, which totally happens! I just wanted to mention it because your work is really good, and fixing those little things would make it even better. Maybe try to take notes of important details while you are writing so it'll be easier to keep up and you wouldn't have re read the whole to continue writing. Thanks for posting your stories for us to enjoy!