Momma_Bean

Hey it's me MP! i'm re-naming my Yin and Yang book and don't want to publish the next chapter till I have a cover so I decided let's make this a Competition! Let me know if any of you would actually be interested and I'll tell you guys what I want in the cover and I'll choose which one I like best! You will be credited for the cover of course have no fear! Peace out puppies!

Momma_Bean

Ill tell you what I want the cover to be 
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hannahgram-p

@MiraculousPuppy I want to do this but I'm not too good at coming up with this sort of thing 
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Atlantaes

Hey lovely,
          Your book Corrupetd is amazing! You had the perfect opening: quick, short, and instantly hooking to the reader. It makes them wonder, what's next? Who is this person? What happened to her parents?
          To really immerse the reader, show more than tell. You've already nailed that during the action scenes, but when it comes to characters, we learn about the characters more by dialogue rather than seeing it playing into action (at least at the beginning). Like the MC- she's been researching Corrupted for a while now as well as studying weapons during training. We learn that though by dialogue, and not exactly finding that out ourselves through the scenes. I don't know if that makes any sense. This is your book of course, and I'm only making a few suggestions.
          Like I said, amazing job what you have thus far. Keep up the great work!

Momma_Bean

Thank you so much! I’ll keep this in mind! It makes me so happy that you’re reading Corrupted because I love all of your works so much. They always make me laugh so thank you so much for the feedback! This is really just a first draft. The writing gets better over time and I’ll try to keep this in mind for future chapters! Thank you so much for the feedback!
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JEE_jeon

Oh wow, you write a lot! 

Momma_Bean

Ok now it’s announced XD
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Momma_Bean

A lot of them are on an unannounced hiatus, the ones I’m really working on are Corrupted: The PainWe Feel, What Makes You Beautiful, and Beyond The Stars
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Momma_Bean

I just have too many story ideas is all  
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