MommyIyaMayak

in chapter 12 of TOW Cade called matteo a bastard and someone commented that she couldn't be the one saying that....I DIED. LOLL PLS KEEP COMMENTING ON MY BOOK

ykw so annoying? the fact that im barely reading any books, not bc im in a reading slump, no, bc there are just barely any good books to read and if there are then ive alr read them, can ppl rec me books like the blackened blade by isla davon and Blood oath by Morgan B Lee
          
          Or books that have these requirements
          
          1. Fantasy/paranormal
          2. Reverse harem
          3. Academy setting
          4. non virgin fmc (look at my last announcements on here to see why)
          5. the fmc is morally grey
          6. the fmc is able to kill without being distraught (bonus points if she's an assassin)
          7. the fmc is OP and physically strong
          8. the mmc are OBSESSED w her
          9. hidden heritage for the fmc (bonus if it links to monarchy or gods)
          10. the fmc is pretending to be weaker than she acc is
          11. she doesnt stand down to bullying
          12. (bonus: if she has anger issues like dianna from the book of azrael)
          13. the fmc was abused or smth (i will dnf if the mmc have been SA'd bc i js dont like how its portrayed in most books)
          14. (bonus: shes older but not physically like shes 20 but shes been alive for thousands of years) 
          15. (bonus: shes dies and comes back multiple times) 
          16 (bonus: (based more on the blackened blade) the fmc dies in a very traumatic way and then gets sent back in time (the time jump has to be long (like 5 years +) 
          
          uhhh can yall also do me a favour and before you rec any books like go check them on good reads js to double check if the fmc is a virgin bc lord knows I hate the 'virgin-heroine' trope

(Last part)
          
          And there's more and more, highkey I think my main issue with this series was the men being absolute manwhores, and from the reviews on the author's other series, it seems as though this is a common pattern with her books.
          
          It's very obvious that Hannah Haze has a virginity fetish, and that she enjoys the very old norm of men being rakes while the women were 'clean' and 'unused'.
          
          Hannah, if you are reading this, your books are shit, and you should never even attempt to write another book for the rest of your pathetic virginity fetishising life.
          
          Oh, and you know how I said a pro was the pig? Yeah, well, in the last book, the fmc lets the pig go out into the wild, and we don't see him again for the rest of the book or in the epilogue.
          
          Congrats Hannah. You made my least favourite book ever. But you know what, I will admit that your writing is good and the plot was actually decent, it's just the pacing, characters and the manwhores in your book that make me gag. Worst book ever.

The same MMC (wolf MMC) who fucked the girl in the shower isn't even a good manwhore, he's a SELF-SERVING manwhore. If you don't know what I mean by that, a self-serving manwhore is a manwhore who only fucks for his own pleasure. How do I know this? Well, in the last book, the wolf MMC said that he had never gone down on a woman before because he never cared enough to give them pleasure.
          
          Teacher MMC portrayed horribly, same teacher MMC dumps shit on her
          
          Teacher MMC's bsf (we're gonna call him motor MMC) is hot and cold with the fmc at the start, after HE kissed her
          
          Motor mmc forced a bond on her bc she was dying, (I get it, but at the same time imagine almost dying and waking up to find out that ur married, like that's what this BS gives)
          
          Oh, and yk how I said the fmc was dying? Yeah, the fifth and last MMC tried to kill her. And out of everyone, he's my favourite.
          
          Like, this book was so shitty, and everyone was so unnecessarily mean to the fmc for basically no reason.
          
          The FMC finds out her dad is like the king of the west and proceeds to kill him in less than three chapters. Bitch I didn't like it when Percy Jackson defeated Ares in less than three pages, what tf made you think you were exempt?
          
          (part three next)

lmao i made a goodreads account recently and this was one of the reveiws i made yesterday lolll
          
          Book: Fractured Fates (Arrowhart Academy Series) 
          Author: Hannah Haze 
          
          This book was so shitty that I read the entire series just so I could talk shit about it properly. (This review will contain spoilers from all the books in this fuckass series)
          
          Ok wait, this is unfair lemme tell you the pros first of all,
          
          Pros:
          Pip (the pig)
          
          Ok! Woo! That really made all the difference. Now, let's get onto the cons, shall we?
          
          Cons:
          
          Stupid, weak, unaware, obviously virgin fmc (the obviously virgin bit is like when ppl are overly shy to their preferred romantic sex, and they act a certain way around/talking about sex. etc)
          
          Manwhore mmcs (plural)
          
          A fantasy/paranormal academy turned into a cliche, stereotypical American high school with the tiniest hint of magic.
          
          fmc that pinned down one of the mmc's at the start of the book and killed a man turned into a weak bitch who couldn't fight for herself.
          
          fmc walks in on a mmc fucking another girl.
          
          The same MMC who fucked another girl in front of the fmc also has a lesbian fetish because in one of the books (possibly the first or second), he watches two girls kiss and touch each other up, then, in his POV, confesses that he knows the moans are fake and that they're just doing this to please him. LIKE WTF. As a proud Bi sexual woman, this is disgusting and weird asf esp if he KNOWS that they do not enjoy this.
          
          fmc gets kicked out of the communal showers so that another MMC can fuck a diff girl
          
          (Part one of the reveiw bc it was over 2000 words and wattpad doesnt like that)

i hate it when people describe others as broken, they aren't not unless they're dead or they're living like theyve died. The correct term would be damaged and i could writes reasons for this and what each word implies but im not so uh do with this what you will

unpopular opinion but i hate when writers make the mmc's get raped for no reason. Like its stated once in the book then never brought up again. Like it adds nothing to the character or plot, or anything so what was the point of adding it esp if you arent going to even address it properly?

im in the ok so i have to wait a while to see love island usa s8, but i js watched a livestream and catched myself tf up, and holy shit, i hate calling women anything insulting thats related to a man (slut, hoe, whore etc) but these bitches are BIRDS like tweet tweet bitch. and its the fact that im mature enough to try to not be hypocritical, Huda from last season love her bc i wouldve crashed out too, melanie (highkey did not fw the 'give me ten' scene but) the scene with Sol n insincere? bitch i wouldve been GONEEEE. So i try to have a sense of understanding, but i wouldnt defend a man when its so obvious that he wronged another girl. and im not saying that KC picking titi was bad, like i defended Clarke n Taylor, but its the way he went about it fr. 
          
          But anyways it just infuriates me, esp bc the girls were all being nice to them, and ALSO OMG THE CASA GIRLS TALKING SHIT ABT THE GIRLS AND KENZIE LIKE BITCH, WATCH HOW YOU TALK ABT MY GIRL SPLITZ. 
          
          ugh these girls were birds fr, last season's Casa girls were so much better.
          
          Also bryce and trinity are getting that bag fr, and idr fw zach no more but kayda getting second, melanie getting third, and then cleb and aniyah are getting four n five. (side note, caleb is such a sweet heart omg)

Taking a MUCH more extended break bc a family member is on life support and I just cant find the will to write with this going on (She was pregnant and she gave birth but the placenta didnt come out fully and then it broke into peices and poisoned her body and now she has liver and kidney failure, and they had to remove her uterus) Lord this has me so fucked up.

i hate that me looking good means that im not struggling?? like just because im wearing makeup does not mean my problems are not still there?? like why do i need to LOOK like my problems for them to exist?