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X_Im_scary_X

Thank you for voting on my story you are one of the very first people and I appreciate it her much. This means a lot to me. Thank you for supporting me 

X_Im_scary_X

@X_Im_scary_BOO_X Thank you for the feedback I will make some changes and work hard to improve my writing  x
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Momothemagnificent

@X_Im_scary_BOO_X in the second chapter you forgot a few capital letters like with the brothers name and since i was not familiar with that name i was very confused. And overall i think the envirment could be a bit better explained in the 2nd sencond chapter but it was still good.
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X_Im_scary_X

@X_Im_scary_BOO_X Thank you  Is there anything I can improve on?
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ellefury

Hi! Dankie vir die terug volg - jammer ek kon nou eers sê. Min dat mens Afrikaanse mense op Wattpad "raakloop". Dis lekker! Skryf jy?

ellefury

@Momothemagnificent Wel, as jy sou belangstel om my werkies te lees - dis altyd lekker om nuwe lesers by te kry! 
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Momothemagnificent

@ZelZel7 nee ek verkies ma om te lees :)
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