@WonderStarartist hello^^ I'm glad if my book can give you a positive impact^^ Unfortunately, I'm not that professional to be able to give other advice, because this is also my first book TvT
But you can try to write a story that suits your personality. Make a story that interests you too, because if you are not interested then your readers will be too. The point is don't lose interest in your book, stay enthusiastic, and don't get tired of writing. To start, be confident and publish your story with pride^^
C'mon, you can do it!>v<
As for the couple, I'll let lavenia decide-v-