MonicaIriz715

Aloha Minna-san. I just want to tell my readers about a new story from my younger sister. The name of the books is His Untouchables Wallflower Wife. She is mew to Wattpad and I hope you all support Her

MonicaIriz715

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Bantangaj

Hello Author 
          Ur novel plot is great and FLUFFY❤
          But it has many plot holes and too rushed
          I have read many novels so i will like to give some advice according to my knowledge❤
          
          1)explain how did the MC got to know that he is in a Novel anf which character he is.
          2)how did he react to this experience and write what was going through his mind.
          3)describe the looks of main characters with depth and side character not so much dept.
          4)described the surrounding when it is relevant to the plot.
          5)describe the facial expressions of the characters.
          6) for s*x seens u can take inspiration from other novels
          (If u need suggestion on novels u can ask me❤)

15_pisces

I am your new fan 
          I just want to say keep having fun and you should update as soon as you can I can't wait for the next chapter
          
          Thank you for your story

15_pisces

@MonicaIriz715 take your time I will wait and support you that is what my morals as a fan tells me too 
            And I love your contents 
            Keep working hard (つ°ヮ°)つ↖(^ω^)↗
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MonicaIriz715

@15_pisces I'm sorry for not updated for so long since I'm too busy with everything around me. I'll update the next chapter if I finally have free time. 
            And thank you for supporting me☺
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