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Nice bio lol

@kalebperez hey what's up

Hi

Nic thanks for critiquing my writing (critiquing I a good thing if you don't know)

If you could send me a copy of the first chapter I could add some corrections and details I think you might of missed

@kalebperez thx bro yeah I will look thru your book

Ok I have more of my rant lol >.> in your book slow down the pace and add suspense it may feel like you have a lot but if you read it you rush into everything just slow down you don't need a chapter a day or anything your writing had true potential if you would take more time to make chapters linger and slower ya know? 

Holy crap dude Alpha company is discriptive like the other one and I love it!!! I need a favor...could you look through mine and add details and stuff you writing style...is so...amazing its way different from mine so I would like for you to look through my book The Demon Child I would very much like it THANKS!!!!  

Vague is impossibly diacritics I love it!!!! But possibly the chapters should be longer...like combine the 2nd and 3rd and make the first and introduction chapter very good though don't stop!!!! 

@BookwormGirl16 hey Chadwick out my newest book called The Vague