Hi! I just wanted to say that I took a look at both of your books! Their storylines are amazing, and you are very creative! However, I feel that Human Weapon Unleashed seems a little rushed at the beginning. Maybe go back and try to space out all of the information the readers are given. It was as if you were trying to give all of the details away in the first chapter. Just a thought. I think that you could be a really great author one day! They all start out slow, so just give it time and I'm sure you will get there!!
