Okay. So, I've talking to my cousin, and we have decided that the people we based the characters, "Pain" and "Hobo" on, are not who we once thought they were. So we have decided to remove them from the book. Its not gonna be easy, but if you ask for it. I can take down the first chapter and rewrite it so we can make the new characters fit in better.
What do you guys think. Or should I just wrote a different book and abandon this one.