Moonlight_Bee

Hey cuties!! I hope you guys are having a beautiful day! I just published the first chapter of my new book " His Girls" .You guys can check it out if you want! Stay safe and happy!<3

jem_iii

I love your book "The barbarian's girl"
          Lovely plot...but the errors in the story made it kinda hard to read and understand sometimes. Mistakes happen and that's totally fine...BUT! I can help you correct or avoid those mistakes. I'm a proofreader and editor and I'll help polish your words and perfect your writing! Since my hobby is reading and yours is writing, it's a win-win for us.

Mindful_Imaginist

Excerpt from my new short story:
          
          "Smile for me, Cherry," he urged with a mix of command and desperation. The woman met his gaze with lifeless eyes, mechanically stretching her lips into a semblance of a smile.
          Frustrated, he insisted on a "proper smile," emphasizing his desperation and command. As her lips widened, the hollowness in her eyes sent a shiver down his spine.
          With a hushed realization, he whispered, "It's like you're dead."
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/361675231?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Mindful_Imaginist
          
            It's been an exciting journey so far, and I'd love it if you could check it out and be a part of my writing adventure. 

-R-H-Y-T-H-M-

Hello
          Chapter 3 from the book, 'His girl' is missing. So can you please post it. 
          
          P. S. Your book is freaking awesome

-R-H-Y-T-H-M-

@Moonlight_Bee You too have a nice day
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Moonlight_Bee

@-R-H-Y-T-H-M- thank u so much!!! I'm really glad u enjoyed it!! I will definitely write more stories when I have free time!!! Thank you for reading story!! Have a beautiful day!!
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-R-H-Y-T-H-M-

@Moonlight_Bee I read the whole story twice and it's really good and I enjoyed it. Hope you will write more stories like this. And you are a human you are bound to make mistakes, so chill.
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