Angelica192
Just a suggestion on the book your currently writing one thing important definitely love it absolutely good book so far however, I have a suggestion because how you’re writing the book I may be wrong. You can tell me if I am, but how are you put Severus in the story and how you and how you describe their interactions each and every time makes me believe deep down severance does have feelings for Anastasia maybe you can add him maybe a couple chapters and maybe one chapter of his point of view of how he feels about Anastasia if it’s just a friendship if it’s like I care for her maybe in a friend way or I care for her more deeply maybe put information of how he feels if he knows the secret relationship between her and Lupin and how he feels about it that would be a really good kind of like plot twist
MoonysPrincess
Thank you for the feedback!! Would you like to see Severus have feelings for her? Honestly, I initially started with that idea, but then I had a different thought… Because I’m currently going back and forth between two different things and I’m heavily torn between both options, I’d love to know opinions on this matter. But if you would like a Severus POV, I think I could manage that either way!
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