I would very much appreciate any critiques for Knox, I only published it hours ago, the little thing is only five pages long, though, Lockjaw Storytelling is a brief thing. Hehe.
I haven't posted anything in at least two years so this is a bit exciting. The date a bit ironic.
I would like to thank anyone who put up with me explaining the bloody idea, readers, and the coffeeshop workers who had to see my damn face 1-3 times a week. Real horrorshow.