MorganIshmael

Cue maniacal laughter and loud organ music in a minor key -- my horror drabble for the Reading List Marathon has drawn its first monstrous breath in the ominous Wattpad world of Halloween tales. So if you haven't had enough scary stories yet, Lilly can give you a fright at the link below (if you dare):
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/798954139-the-reading-list-marathon-lilly
          	
          	Actually, like most of the stories in this collection, it was my first try with horror -- so it might be merely horrific. Suggestions and input are always welcome.
          	
          	OOOHHHH WAIT! I forgot to add something (so I deleted that and reposted, sorry if you get it twice). The story title I used this round came from a really enjoyable romance short (and you won't hear those words from me very often). So if you're glutted on horror for the season, and looking for your sweet treats instead, check out @ElJadius and a completely different Lilly at  https://www.wattpad.com/404547404-lilly
          	
          	Happy Halloween!

MorganIshmael

Cue maniacal laughter and loud organ music in a minor key -- my horror drabble for the Reading List Marathon has drawn its first monstrous breath in the ominous Wattpad world of Halloween tales. So if you haven't had enough scary stories yet, Lilly can give you a fright at the link below (if you dare):
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/798954139-the-reading-list-marathon-lilly
          
          Actually, like most of the stories in this collection, it was my first try with horror -- so it might be merely horrific. Suggestions and input are always welcome.
          
          OOOHHHH WAIT! I forgot to add something (so I deleted that and reposted, sorry if you get it twice). The story title I used this round came from a really enjoyable romance short (and you won't hear those words from me very often). So if you're glutted on horror for the season, and looking for your sweet treats instead, check out @ElJadius and a completely different Lilly at  https://www.wattpad.com/404547404-lilly
          
          Happy Halloween!

JH_Foliage

Ahh thank you, thank you SO MUCH for voting and reading Eye of Saffiyah!! Most that have read never made it to the end. I really appreciate you taking the time. I'm also aware that a lot of things need to be fixed but I'm not sure what, so any feedback at all will be great. Again, thank you! It makes me really happy. (I'm sorry this message is rushed; I'll come back if I have time!)

MorganIshmael

@JadeFoliage You're more than welcome - I enjoyed it. I don't usually feel qualified to give out advice, but since you asked, I'll give it another look and let you know if anything jumps out at me.
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