Hey you guys,
I wrote a short story for a school competition and i want your advice. Soo... If i posted it here would you give me some feed back? Id love you forever and if i get constructive criticism, maybe you could be the reason i win! :3 it should be up in the next day or two, if you could read it and tell me what you think id give you cookies :3
Thank you ^.^
Emz