@Motogold_747
Hey guys! I wanna give a shoutout to my good friend Melon(DrTacoProductions). He is starting to write the story for a series whe has been working hard on. I am going to be working with him as part of the crew but I wanted to share with you his story he had started. Please send him the love he deserves. ^^
Here is his story...
https://my.w.tt/XAQQdAZweW
Hey guys, sorry I haven't been updating recently. I promise to get a new chapter out on Nature Spirit and A Wolf in the Woods very soon. I hope you can forgive me for my absense but life has been a bit busy. ·¬·
Hi! I have a funny question. On the little paragraph about u it says your 15 then u turn 17. Where did 16 go? xD
Hello! You are a good person and should keep writing your book! Have a good day and life! Never stop or feel depressed. Somebody will always love you no matter what. Don't worry.
Wow so far the book is awsome
On the dialogue, maybe slow down and include details. Maybe flashbacks. I'm not a critic, just a unexperienced writer trying to survive.
@Katty_Zebra hey its fine. I can help some, but try the book Writing tips by wordsonfire. I have mistakes too :) We're all human. Well, my sister calls me a demon so....... That counts right! Yeah but, happy to help.
@Katty_Zebra Its alright, I'm all in for critique. It helps me learn from my mistakes :)
Any questions about A Wolf In The Woods so far?
