mightasweII
Hi! How are you? I know this is very annoying so feel free to ignore it but I just published my first fanfiction (Harry Styles) and I'd really appreciate it if you could give me you honest opinion even if you don't like it :)
Here's the link: https://my.w.tt/Ia3m7iITIQ
Thank you so much for your time! Have a good day x
Moviesarecool
Hey! So I really like the premise of your story; it's really unique and relatable which is nice. It's realistic which makes it even better.
I like it. If I really had to nitpick, I would suggest maybe not having the majority of the text underlined - maybe just have it normal? My eyes just bug out, but that could just be me.