MozyElyseKaderli

Well he just seemed to be instantly trustworthy in Elena's eyes. I'm not sure he just seemed to be not as real ad Elena is, not as strong of a character,  know what I mean

YuffieProductions

Thanks for the comment! The whole aâ thing was a temporary glitch that happened to all the stories on wattpad, but thankfully it's fixed now. 
          could you elaborate more on how I can do more character development with Hero? What about him seems flat to you?