Mr3131
New chapter is out please let me know what you think of it!
Mr3131
Mr3131
New chapter is out please go let me know what you think!!
WendiKit
Read it. I like it. Focuses on Peter’s and Felicia’s falling out. Also nice twist with uncle Ben. Excited for next chapter ^^
Mr3131
new chapter out today please go check it out when you can and let me know what you think!
WendiKit
Will do. Also nice to have you back. Hope everything is working out now. Or will work out in the future^^
Mr3131
Yeah everyone the first chapter of the Re-written spider-man book is out please check it out if you can and let me know what you thing!
Mr3131
Update on the story and what is going on and where I have been.
Mr3131
Yeah everyone so I’m sorry for the long break I have had a hard spell with my fiance leaving and college getting crazy, I am going to announce that I’m going to be coming back with a re worked first book that will make it more of a Luna x Peter story liked I planned, please bear with me as this dry spell finishes up, thank you all for the support and I hope you all look forward to the re release.
WendiKit
@Mr3131 Ok Wow. Dumped a lot.(not that it's bad. everyone needs a place to release stuff) Hope things work out with u and your fiance. Also i imagine it's finals part of college so work will get hectic. Just take your time with the stories. Come back when u feel relaxed and not stressed out. Hope everything works out with your work and personal life. Wish u the best ^^
Mr3131
Happy Easter everyone, I hope to have a chapter out by the end of this week!
Mr3131
@Ladiesman27777 yeah it’s sucks and it crushed me I hope you are healing from whatever is keeping you down
Mr3131
Yeah everyone sorry this new chapter is taking so long, had some family troubles come up the new chapter will be released soon?
Mr3131
So hear me out, Spider-Man x young justice story?!
Mr3131
There's a new chapter for the Spiderman story. Please go check it out and let me know what you think!
Ladiesman27777
@Mr3131 one more thing, I think Luna has a pretty strong character. She is willing to fight even when she knows she can’t win, “not strong enough to win, but too strong to give up”
Ladiesman27777
@Mr3131 Well just as a start it sounds like Reed has become more and more broken willing to kill Peter by what it sounds like during the last chapter. You could build on Luna’s character by putting her in direct confrontation with him since it can be assumed she would want to protect him. Also, since you said you might rewrite your first book you could also build her character their by showing more of her backstory. From the lore from Rivals, it’s said she lost her parents at a young age. You could build this alongside Peter since he experienced something similar. You could also show her becoming more aggressive after Peter goes missing with her losing the one person who made her feel not so alone