empressofthepen

Heey there (: 
          
          I'm wanting some real criticism on my story, so I can mature as a writer (: You, as a reader and a writer, have an opinion that counts in my books. 
          
          The story is called The Birds, the Bees and Everything in Between. It's about a girl with bipolar, and it follows her story of when he life falls apart and she's left to pick up the pieces. 
          
          I hope that I not only entertain readers, but also introduce people to a stigma that sweeps all of the world, in reference to Mental Health. 
          
          I hope that you take the time to read my story, and I promise to return the favour if needed. 
          
          xoxo erin;

Musicbreatheslife

I ask of a small favour
          I promise it won't take long
          If you'd just read my heartfelt poem
          And let me know your thoughts
          
          It's called 'Love. Is it real?'
          Please read it and vote
          But what I'd value even more
          Will be the comments that you post =D
          
          Thnx so much if you do!! :)
          ~Vee~