MrDerp1
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Happy Easter! I don't really have much planned for today other than a non-Easter related pixel art drawing I did today as my profile background for right now.
I've made better progress with the next chapter for Storm Rising. The chapter name will most likely be titled, "Dread." But that is subject to change.
Stay safe fellas!
MrDerp1
Here's a short, funny story from me, a dude with dyslexia.
I decided to watch a video titled, "Your life as every Bank on the FBI most wanted list." I figured it might be nice to see what that's like, so I decided to watch it.
The only problem is that I didn't quite understand the title, so before watching the video, I reread the title several times to try to understand it. And every single time I somehow missed the fact that it didn't say, "Bank." It said, "Rank." And I swore it didn't say that before.
This is why I always appreciate it when you guys comment on typos I make. Because even if I read over one paragraph in my story, which I often do when writing, I can still very well miss an obvious typo.
Okay! Bye bye for now!
Doomslayer656
Yo @MrDerp1 do you by any chance have any good Hmofa recommendations similar to your story by any chance. And also how have you been.
MrDerp1
@Doomslayer656 Hello! I've been okay. Thank you for asking. For Hmofa type stories, it really depends on what you're going for. If it's romance type stuff you're trying to do, then it's not too terribly different from just regular human on human romance. You could focus on the culture differences between the human and anthro, for more lemon based stories, you could focus on heat cycles as that's pretty common I believe. You could do a slow-burn where it takes a while to build trust, stuff like that. It really just depends on what you're aiming for. The biggest thing is just how both characters are emotionally.
MrDerp1
Been having this story idea for the future... Like, way in the future. I wondered about if I made a story based off the fear of large objects. Megalophobia I believe it is called.
The idea is to create a impossibly large creature that threatens humanity. Something kinda inspired off the Wither Storm in Minecraft story mode... If anybody even remembers that... Really cool concept for a monster by the way. That's why I wanna make a story based off that idea of a giant, nearly unstoppable creature.
And plus, I'm not sure how many stories use Megalophobia as it's main premise, so maybe it'll be cool. But yeah, just sharing story ideas I have occasionally. If you have any of your own, I'm all ears.
Okay! Bye bye!
SoBasicallyN0
@MrDerp1 I think it's a really cool premise, the 2 major things that pop into my head regarding megalophobia are Cloverfield and The Call of Cthulu, both of which are incredible (I would highly suggest that you watch and read them, they're so good.)
Doomslayer656
@MrDerp1 that's an amazing idea brother. Honestly I was thinking of doing a horror book of megalophobia myself, either with the ocean or space considering there's not many of them.
MrDerp1
Hello! How's my readers doing? I do apologize for the painfully long wait for the next chapter of Futuristic World: Storm Rising. The chapter is actually almost done finally, but progress has been very slow.
Just a quick update from me regarding Storm Rising. I am still alive, and I am still working. I hope to see everybody soon!
flamejames14
Hello! So i have aome copl interesting story ideas, 1. A cool like finial 4 chapters, so we all rember when we found out poly was acturly a fluffy and not a clanker? I have a theory that its possible for him to be broufht back with same persinlity same evrything just no memories idk but basically there in the doctors lab and they cone acrose poly and sapphire rembers it but he doesnt or whatever and cool chapter name is "You don't rembee me" or "Forgotten Geometry" cuz poly is like a shape or smth IDK anothee idea is the ending for thr story basicly Y/N js able to go back and but right he is about to dene- wait this sounds like sonic X NO diffeent becuase of how space time works Y/N new name who i Forgt steps in the portal only to be sadden to find out that its way past the time he is and out of sadness he goes back but lets be fr he had littery no family or what we know of? Thats only for our goat MrDERP1 do decide and quick tip when playing silksong or HN expect alot of backtracking and other things and rember metrovainas are not everyones cup of tea and yeah thats it for me GOODNIGHT/GOODMORNING
MrDerp1
@flamejames14 Sorry for not responding sooner. I didn't get a notification on your message. But thank you for your ideas! Poly will be mentioned a few times throughout the story. Not sure about being brought back. Perhaps as an AI as even though Poly got his head separated, thr AI chip would still be functional. So there's some room there. Right now, Chapter 4 is basically a set up chapter. Meaning that it's not as interesting as some other chapters, but is important so help give the reader knowledge on something they're gonna need to know later. This also means a lot of time has been put into planning near future events so it can all make sense. I wished it was already out, but I haven't had time to work on it. I will soon though. Been trying to get back in the swing of things. Anyways, thank you again for your ideas and suggestions!
MrDerp1
Hello Hello my readers! Sorry the next chapter for Storm Rising is taking so long. I have been coming up with some fantastic ideas that I want to work towards though.
However... I will say, the hardest part of writing so far is trying to figure out how to properly expand on the characters. I have left myself a poor foundation to work with after the original story, so I need to make up for it in the sequel. I have a few ideas though, but it's going to take some time.
Stay safe everyone! Hopefully see you soon!
flamejames14
@MrDerp1 my brothe= your chill after all youe making a non profit book with so much others and dispite it not having as much as FW in its prime theres still alot of people still here and rember guests and non acounts COUNT as a veiw so yeah and it does make sence how it can be confusing but still dont give up! If you loose motivation take breaks and the 1 thing is DONT PUT THIS BOOK FIRST focus on other important things and once your done you can do other things you wanna thats not required
Doomslayer656
@MrDerp1 that's perfectly okay, just take your time. Ill be waiting whenever you're ready.
JosephJeffreys
@MrDerp1 Hey I don't blame you. You're a hard working author who made Futuristic World Sequels and the Treasure Island
flamejames14
Hello! Confrats in your book reachinf number 1 in weather? When i first saw that i was confused but judging how the title is storm rising and the gang is dealing with high stormy thinfs i gues thats why? Pretty intrestint but atleast its number one is something lol
flamejames14
MrDerp1
@flamejames14 It is? I never knew that. That's crazy considering that we haven't even reached the, "Weather" part of the story yet ;>
flamejames14
Heya guys! So one thing ive noticed is despite the sequal being somehat hyped its acturly.. flopping? Not like in trying to discourage you Mr derpman but still seing it and if i was in your shoes id be super unmotivated to continue but still if we do think about it, it did start gaining traction around the end but still take your time dude there id still alot of people who wanna see it end and i have said it before the most likly reason its not getting alot of veiws is because most people just dont know because the sequal and non veiwers or non acounts count as veiws but still even if you feel discouraged keep going
MrDerp1
@flamejames14 That's a problem almost every show, story, ect has. Overtime, less and less people will continue on with it. The view count for the chapters in Futuristic World show it pretty well. This is why I have been working on a separate story in the background as I work on Storm Rising. New stories bring new people. However, I will admit that it has been demotivating at times. I try my best to keep writing though. I have many ideas that I would hate to never make good use of.
flamejames14
MERRY. CHRISMAS!! look on steam bc silksong and hollownight is on sale yall and honestly mt dero i dont mind u taking a break my dude so yeah merry chrismas
MrDerp1
@flamejames14 Merry Christmas! I have Hollow knight, but not Silksong. So I'll have to check that out. Thank you! And have a good one!