MrDerp

Y'all shouldn't have to wait too long for the next chapter. I've been working on it a lot and I'm already at 6,000 words for it.
          
          I'm gonna try to get it out tomorrow, stay tuned.

Hello, my brother, I want to tell you that I loved your story of "a futuristic world", and I just wanted to ask you if
          Is the end of this story approaching and if you can, could you give me some clue as to how it will end?
          
          Thank you for reading my comment and if so, I hope for your prompt response.

Hello everyone. This is just a small update I wanted to do for y'all.
          
          My dog has just recently gotten out of surgery, so I'm trying to look after her. I've also been spending a lot of time thinking about how the story should go, so hopefully y'all will have a new chapter out soon!
          
          Just wanted to do a quick and small update. Stay safe!

I was Happy reading your first story "Lost treasures". I left some small comments of what i thought of it.
          
          Over all, i like the idea of the journey, the Villain, and the people inside.
          
          But you should place a bit more plausible ideas.
          
          If the rifle was there, some radio equipment might be lying around (maybe a sailor tries to help, but meets and marries a shark, instead of dying).
          
          One thing i like to voice: "Ya'll" gets annoying if repeated too many times, use other ways to refer to a group. Use their appearance, way of behaving, what they have in hand, or how they think ("the winter coat", "science team", "sharpies", "the jellied gangle", " misfits", "chucklefucks", "gaggle", "trio", "the gold winners"... and so on).
          
          Take the idea of them having a different language, make their speech understandable for the characters when they need to.
          
          "Hi"
          "-Hi-"
          
          "What?"
          
          "-I said hi!-" 
          
          "...What?"
          
          "-Dumb says what-"
          
          "...WHA-"
          
          You get the idea. If you want to continue the story, i'll gladly read it.
          
          Toodaloo~

W new chapter

I have returned from my little trip. Unfortunately I have not been able to work on the story much during my vacation, but I'm back now and I can begin working on the story again.
          
          Side note... I absolutely hit the jackpot when it comes to loud kids on a airplane.

I'm going on a trip tomorrow. I don't know how much time I'll have to work on the story, but I'll try my best to work on it whenever I can.
          
          So I'm basically going to be on vacation I guess you could say. Hopefully I'll still have time to update the story at some point, but we'll see.
          
          Have a good day!

Question, how would y'all feel about more romance in Futuristic world? And how would you like to see it?
          
          I've been suggested to add more romance into my story, so I want to hear what y'all think about it.

Hey Mr derp I had a few story ideas for you but since there's no more private messages on Wattpad I'd rather not reveal them on your post board, would you per chance have discord? 

I have a couple suggestions/questions about futuristic world.
          Suggestion: Im a little confused on some of the characters such as the protogens and how they work as living beings and size comparisons of most characters. Maybe a chapter can be made at the beginning of current described characters up to the latest chapters of total bios and different societal world characteristics.
          
          Question: was Luna just a side character or will she be reintroduced later?
          
          Question: from what I've read I've noticed how Y/n has changed as a character kinda but he doesn't have much in the arsenal of what he can do, would there be any training we would do or maybe be given a weapon of some kind?
          
          Question: how many chapters do you see this story going for? Cause I personally see it going very far especially with side characters I've noticed been mentioned such as Typhon, maybe a gang member catches us at some point?
          
          Anyway thank you for reading this and I have you have a great day