MrDerp1

Hello fellas. I'm trying to get back into writing, but I must admit, I have been very tempted to try a GameOverse story. If any of you are familiar with that...
          	
          	I'm hesitant to do it though as I like to think of orginal stories if possible, rather than latching onto an already existing one, and doing something else with it. But the new Pilot episode for GameOverse by GLITCH Productions has caught my eye for some reason. Even if it's unclear if an episode 2 will ever come out.
          	
          	Another reason why I'm so hesitant... If more episodes come out, things I write in the story could get thrown out the window very quickly as new information is told to us. But regardless, the concept has been very interesting for me, and I already had several ideas for stories based around it. The Pilot has just hit me creativity I suppose. But I'm unsure? Thoughts?
          	
          	Okay, bye bye fellas!

MrVoidGuy

@MrDerp1 funny enough, I was also thinking about writing a gameoverse story. But yeah! Go for it!
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MrDerp1

Hello fellas. I'm trying to get back into writing, but I must admit, I have been very tempted to try a GameOverse story. If any of you are familiar with that...
          
          I'm hesitant to do it though as I like to think of orginal stories if possible, rather than latching onto an already existing one, and doing something else with it. But the new Pilot episode for GameOverse by GLITCH Productions has caught my eye for some reason. Even if it's unclear if an episode 2 will ever come out.
          
          Another reason why I'm so hesitant... If more episodes come out, things I write in the story could get thrown out the window very quickly as new information is told to us. But regardless, the concept has been very interesting for me, and I already had several ideas for stories based around it. The Pilot has just hit me creativity I suppose. But I'm unsure? Thoughts?
          
          Okay, bye bye fellas!

MrVoidGuy

@MrDerp1 funny enough, I was also thinking about writing a gameoverse story. But yeah! Go for it!
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MrDerp1

Hello fellas. I'm going to take a break for a while. Been pretty busy this month, and I have more stuff coming up. But since I'm here, I got a question.
          
          Action scenes. I have a habit of judging myself quite a lot, and my fight scenes I especially feel like are challenging to do since reading a fight scene is way different from watching it. So with that said... Any advice on writing action scenes? Or if not, what about reading them grabs your interest?
          
          Okay, I gotta go now. Bye for now fellas. See you in Storm Rising sooner or later.

Doomslayer656

@MrDerp1 honestly it's hard for me to write action scenes as well. Ironic considering I have a whole fic about action. But my best advice would be to try your best to visualize how you want to start and end the fight. And in between it's the filler, punch, kicks, inner monologues. I know not very helpful. But reading other fics with action or videos is a great idea. To help inspire your thinking, it's really all up to your imagination. This probably wasn't all that helpful but it's what i got lol. Oh and take your time gang, no rush.
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MrDerp1

Anybody else getting comments basically worshipping your story, then offering to create some kind of comic or visual representation of it?
          
          I've been getting a lot of those recently. They'll follow you, then say a bunch of nice things about your story before giving you a discord name to reach out to, offering to create a comic or something for your story. I know what they're trying to do, but I'm curious if anybody else have seen this.

flamejames14

@MrDerp1 dude ik ive seen this so much but i rlly wish it would happen, a visual repentastion would be fuckinf sick but problems are with this book like chapter one were we get Y/N as name but luckily leo is for this but it jst puts plugs in the story
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cartoonmp

Know a guy, that was a target. His ass nearly got scammed.
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MrVoidGuy

@MrDerp1 The amount I got for my Zeezi x male reader book is insane. You're not alone
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flamejames14

Well, heya and my gosh Mr derp u have been grinding dude but i am back to check up on u and your still posting peak and now to read all of this stuff and Mr derp PLEASE don't give up on this story i will be very sad and will have to end your family  but yes im back and a sick game you guys should play is TBOI

flamejames14

@flamejames14 30 dollars for multiplayer is insane, im so excited for what they do and they BETTER not fricking deep fry it
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MrDerp1

@flamejames14 I was wondering about you. Welcome back. I do not plan to quit writing this story any time soon. Especially since we really haven't even started it yet. All of this has just been the build up. I'll have to try to find that game when I have time. I, personally, have been excited for the release of Subnautica 2.
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MrDerp1

Happy Easter! I don't really have much planned for today other than a non-Easter related pixel art drawing I did today as my profile background for right now.
          
          I've made better progress with the next chapter for Storm Rising. The chapter name will most likely be titled, "Dread." But that is subject to change.
          
          Stay safe fellas!

MrDerp1

Here's a short, funny story from me, a dude with dyslexia.
          
          I decided to watch a video titled, "Your life as every Bank on the FBI most wanted list." I figured it might be nice to see what that's like, so I decided to watch it.
          
          The only problem is that I didn't quite understand the title, so before watching the video, I reread the title several times to try to understand it. And every single time I somehow missed the fact that it didn't say, "Bank." It said, "Rank." And I swore it didn't say that before.
          
          This is why I always appreciate it when you guys comment on typos I make. Because even if I read over one paragraph in my story, which I often do when writing, I can still very well miss an obvious typo.
          
          Okay! Bye bye for now!

flamejames14

@MrDerp1 lol i once forget were i put my chips and it was on my keyboard
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Doomslayer656

@MrDerp1 you just like me for real 
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MrDerp1

@MrDerp1 Strange video by the way.
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Doomslayer656

Yo @MrDerp1 do you by any chance have any good Hmofa recommendations similar to your story by any chance. And also how have you been.

MrDerp1

@Doomslayer656 Hello! I've been okay. Thank you for asking.
            
            For Hmofa type stories, it really depends on what you're going for. If it's romance type stuff you're trying to do, then it's not too terribly different from just regular human on human romance. You could focus on the culture differences between the human and anthro, for more lemon based stories, you could focus on heat cycles as that's pretty common I believe. You could do a slow-burn where it takes a while to build trust, stuff like that. It really just depends on what you're aiming for. The biggest thing is just how both characters are emotionally.
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MrDerp1

Been having this story idea for the future... Like, way in the future. I wondered about if I made a story based off the fear of large objects. Megalophobia I believe it is called.
          
          The idea is to create a impossibly large creature that threatens humanity. Something kinda inspired off the Wither Storm in Minecraft story mode... If anybody even remembers that... Really cool concept for a monster by the way. That's why I wanna make a story based off that idea of a giant, nearly unstoppable creature.
          
          And plus, I'm not sure how many stories use Megalophobia as it's main premise, so maybe it'll be cool. But yeah, just sharing story ideas I have occasionally. If you have any of your own, I'm all ears. 
          
          Okay! Bye bye!

flamejames14

@MrDerp1 Acutely that seems interesting but if so MAKE  a Minecraft story mode reference
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SoBasicallyN0

@MrDerp1 I think it's a really cool premise, the 2 major things that pop into my head regarding megalophobia are Cloverfield and The Call of Cthulu, both of which are incredible (I would highly suggest that you watch and read them, they're so good.)
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Doomslayer656

@MrDerp1 that's an amazing idea brother. Honestly I was thinking of doing a horror book of megalophobia myself, either with the ocean or space considering there's not many of them.
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MrDerp1

Hello! How's my readers doing? I do apologize for the painfully long wait for the next chapter of Futuristic World: Storm Rising. The chapter is actually almost done finally, but progress has been very slow.
          
          Just a quick update from me regarding Storm Rising. I am still alive, and I am still working. I hope to see everybody soon! 

flamejames14

Hello! So i have aome copl interesting story ideas, 1. A cool like finial 4 chapters, so we all rember when we found out poly was acturly a fluffy and not a clanker? I have a theory that its possible for him to be broufht back with same persinlity same evrything just no memories idk but basically there in the doctors lab and they cone acrose poly and sapphire rembers it but he doesnt or whatever and cool chapter name is "You don't rembee me" or "Forgotten Geometry" cuz poly is like a shape or smth IDK anothee idea is the ending for thr story basicly Y/N js able to go back and but right he is about to dene- wait this sounds like sonic X NO diffeent becuase of how space time works Y/N new name who i Forgt steps in the portal only to be sadden to find out that its way past the time he is and out of sadness he goes back but lets be fr he had littery no family or what we know of? Thats only for our goat MrDERP1 do decide and quick tip when playing silksong or HN  expect alot of backtracking and other things and rember metrovainas are not everyones cup of tea and yeah thats it for me GOODNIGHT/GOODMORNING

MrDerp1

@flamejames14 Sorry for not responding sooner. I didn't get a notification on your message. But thank you for your ideas! Poly will be mentioned a few times throughout the story. Not sure about being brought back. Perhaps as an AI as even though Poly got his head separated, thr AI chip would still be functional. So there's some room there. Right now, Chapter 4 is basically a set up chapter. Meaning that it's not as interesting as some other chapters, but is important so help give the reader knowledge on something they're gonna need to know later. This also means a lot of time has been put into planning near future events so it can all make sense. I wished it was already out, but I haven't had time to work on it. I will soon though. Been trying to get back in the swing of things. Anyways, thank you again for your ideas and suggestions!
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