MrDerp1

Hello fellas! Just wanted to come here and say that from what I've seen... Black Ops 7 is ass bro. Seriously, hsve you seen any clips of it? It's like a far cry game with a dark souls bossfight, bad writing, and reused assets. I guess that's what we expect from a modern COD game, huh? Where's the passion behind it?
          	
          	Whatever. Just wanted to being that up. How's everyone doing? I've been busy trying to plan ahead for Storm Rising. I have plenty of ideas, just little time to get it all down.
          	
          	If you're looking for any good games to play other than Call of Duty, try Hollow knight, Terraria, or Subnautica. If you want a multiplayer experience, try THE FINALS.
          	
          	It was nice catching up. Stay safe!

MrVoidGuy

@MrDerp1 It's garbage, but the zombies is good. I'm already have bloodstone on all my assault rifles and snipers lol
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miccahstaimee

@MrDerp1 I'm doing ok and yeah black ops 7... I just don't know what to day about that trash.
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Doomslayer656

@MrDerp1 well I've been doing well. Played dispatch fire game, and now currently waiting for risk of rain 2 dlc which comes Tuesday.
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MrDerp1

Hello fellas! Just wanted to come here and say that from what I've seen... Black Ops 7 is ass bro. Seriously, hsve you seen any clips of it? It's like a far cry game with a dark souls bossfight, bad writing, and reused assets. I guess that's what we expect from a modern COD game, huh? Where's the passion behind it?
          
          Whatever. Just wanted to being that up. How's everyone doing? I've been busy trying to plan ahead for Storm Rising. I have plenty of ideas, just little time to get it all down.
          
          If you're looking for any good games to play other than Call of Duty, try Hollow knight, Terraria, or Subnautica. If you want a multiplayer experience, try THE FINALS.
          
          It was nice catching up. Stay safe!

MrVoidGuy

@MrDerp1 It's garbage, but the zombies is good. I'm already have bloodstone on all my assault rifles and snipers lol
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miccahstaimee

@MrDerp1 I'm doing ok and yeah black ops 7... I just don't know what to day about that trash.
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Doomslayer656

@MrDerp1 well I've been doing well. Played dispatch fire game, and now currently waiting for risk of rain 2 dlc which comes Tuesday.
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MrDerp1

Hello! Hello! So I was just about to get back to writing chapter 3 for Storm Rising, and I noticed a new button that wasn't there before.
          
          "Add a pole."
          
          From my understanding, I get to put in a question, have two or more answers, and I guess the reader chooses one. This addition came out of nowhere for me. How do you guys feel about this new feature? Do you plan to use it yourself if you written your own stories?
          
          Personally... I can see this being more than perfect for a future story I did I had one time. Unfortunately, I have too much going on right now to start that story. But it's an idea.
          
          Okay cool, see ya. Bye. Farewell. Adios.

Henry-Man

@ MrDerp1  Makes sense. Many authors make separate chapters for polls in their stories. Now, they just have to announce in the story there's a pole.
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Doomslayer656

@MrDerp1 I like it. I actually already used the feature. Its a nice way to get more feedback and inengagement with readers. Well thats just my opinion.
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L0g0Z0g0

@MrDerp1 I had also gotten it a few days ago. Not super useful if you don't get much responses in the time before you start writing something new(unless the poll is story unrelated). It's very weird that I've read about polls on a random blog post from Wattpad almost a year ago, and thought they were just given out at random like tts on some stories, but apparently now it's just available for everyone or something.
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MrDerp1

I've been experimenting with a short spin-off story idea. And when I say short, I mean very short. Less than 10 chapters short, and probably shorter word count for each chapter too.
          
          I haven't decided if I'll commit to it yet. It's in the same universe as Futuristic World though. None of the main characters you know are in this short spin-off story, but it is in the same universe.
          
          The main point of the story is to show that stuff is going on outside what Leo is aware of. Earth and this weird furry planet slowly discovering each other overtime. Just imagine Earth staring at the stars, and knowing that there's something staring back...
          
          I don't know. Thoughts?

SoBasicallyN0

@MrDerp1 while I was reading your first futuristic word story I always found myself wondering what was happening back on earth. I think a short story about what happened after Leo gets transported would be a great idea.
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MrDerp1

I wonder what Earth is up to while Leo is stuck 500 light-years away on this new planet with Densantra...

Doomslayer656

@MrDerp1 Probably a war over the teleporter that sent Leo on the planet in the first place.
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TheEpicKnight

@MrDerp1 Chances are his TN mother is worried or crying because she might never see him again, and governments should be investing more in portal technology after the trial with Leo.
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Spice_Dice

@MrDerp1 probably still developing technology or just doing political conflicts with no progress in terms of technology 
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MrDerp1

Hello, hi, hey, Howdy!
          
          Been a minute since you've heard from me... But progress has been very slow lately. I've just haven't had much time to work, and the time that I do get is very limited. I am still working though. Approaching 5,000 words for chapter 2 on Storm Rising. I kinda wished I was past that point already, but I'm trying.
          
          Anyways. Since it's been a while, whacha been up to? Any cool stories lately? If so, tell me about them since I'm probably not gonna have the time to read them. I've had plenty of ideas for future stories, but I just can't get into them since my hands are full already. Take my word for it that I have some absolute genius ideas :]

Doomslayer656

@MrDerp1 I've been writing my new story on doom and am surprised by how many people like my story. It's honestly a serial. As for books I've been reading it's a persona 5 fanfic called sitting behind you. It's basically just a retailing of the game but done amazingly well with a few key differences. I'll leave it at that. Oh and take your time.
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MrDerp1

Chapter 1 for Futuristic World: Storm Rising drops in the next hour! Reminder that this will serve as a teaser and a chance to receive early feedback as I plan the direction I want this story to take. Of course, most is still unknown as it is just the start of the story.
          
          See you REAL soon!

Doomslayer656

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@MrDerp1 oh shit, it is time My brothers
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MrDerp1

How has everyone been? I hope you're doing well! If not, maybe this can make your day just a little better.
          
          While I've been quiet for some time now, somewhere on another planet is a city known as Night Glow city that has been in a rough patch for the past 4 months after F.U.R was demolished. Nobody really understands what's going on. Some have guesses, opinions, and theories, but nobody knows for sure.
          
          We're all lost in the dark... But maybe the answer isn't in the city anymore. Perhaps we're in the eye of the storm, and something else lies outside of it.
          
          Chapter 1 for Futuristic World: Storm Rising is coming soon. Consider chapter 1 has a teaser for the rest of the story. Feedback is highly encouraged once it is published in the next day or so.
          
          See you soon!

Alexcru03

@ MrDerp1  nicee, I'm excited :)
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JosephJeffreys

@MrDerp1 can't wait for the Futuristic World Sequel
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Overripemuffin57

@MrDerp1 I'm eager to see what you've cooked up this time
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cartoonmp

Hey, man you doing good?

MrDerp1

@cartoonmp Thank you for asking! Yes, I'm doing alright. Got a lot on my mind, but I'm making it work. I do appreciate you checking in on me though.
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MrDerp1

I was still cold... But I feared something else. This bad feeling in my chest override the thoughts of a warm bath. I'm in the dark now. Perhaps I was safe, but I didn't feel like it. I thought I got over my fear of the dark, but I guess not. Cause I felt like something was coming. Something bad.
          
          .............................................
          
          The first chapter of Futuristic World Storm Rising is now complete! I am very excited to see what people have to say about it when the story is published!
          
          Brace yourselves folks! We're just in the eye of the storm right now. Leo still needs to learn how to live in this world, but his vacation along with Densantra, Sapphire, Amber, and of course Dome gets cut off abruptly when things seem just a tad off.
          
          I hope to see you there soon! Stay safe!