MrDerp1

Starting today, I will be going on a short vacation. I know Storm Rising hasn't been updated in a while now, but rest assured that I'm working on it. The next chapter especially will be the one that truly begins the story...
          	
          	Okay, bye for now fellas!

JosephJeffreys

@MrDerp1 You know what Jedis always say "Do or Do not there is no try"
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MrDerp1

Starting today, I will be going on a short vacation. I know Storm Rising hasn't been updated in a while now, but rest assured that I'm working on it. The next chapter especially will be the one that truly begins the story...
          
          Okay, bye for now fellas!

JosephJeffreys

@MrDerp1 You know what Jedis always say "Do or Do not there is no try"
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flamejames14

Mrderp is back and is working overtime for our summer greatness thank you zaddy :3

MrDerp1

@flamejames14 Heh, trying to at least. Been working on a side project and taking a break from Storm Rising. Mainly just for writing practice. I'll probably upload it once it's done, but after that, I'm heading back to Storm Rising.
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MrDerp1

Hello fellas. I'm trying to get back into writing, but I must admit, I have been very tempted to try a GameOverse story. If any of you are familiar with that...
          
          I'm hesitant to do it though as I like to think of orginal stories if possible, rather than latching onto an already existing one, and doing something else with it. But the new Pilot episode for GameOverse by GLITCH Productions has caught my eye for some reason. Even if it's unclear if an episode 2 will ever come out.
          
          Another reason why I'm so hesitant... If more episodes come out, things I write in the story could get thrown out the window very quickly as new information is told to us. But regardless, the concept has been very interesting for me, and I already had several ideas for stories based around it. The Pilot has just hit me creativity I suppose. But I'm unsure? Thoughts?
          
          Okay, bye bye fellas!

MrVoidGuy

@MrDerp1 funny enough, I was also thinking about writing a gameoverse story. But yeah! Go for it!
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MrDerp1

Hello fellas. I'm going to take a break for a while. Been pretty busy this month, and I have more stuff coming up. But since I'm here, I got a question.
          
          Action scenes. I have a habit of judging myself quite a lot, and my fight scenes I especially feel like are challenging to do since reading a fight scene is way different from watching it. So with that said... Any advice on writing action scenes? Or if not, what about reading them grabs your interest?
          
          Okay, I gotta go now. Bye for now fellas. See you in Storm Rising sooner or later.

Doomslayer656

@MrDerp1 honestly it's hard for me to write action scenes as well. Ironic considering I have a whole fic about action. But my best advice would be to try your best to visualize how you want to start and end the fight. And in between it's the filler, punch, kicks, inner monologues. I know not very helpful. But reading other fics with action or videos is a great idea. To help inspire your thinking, it's really all up to your imagination. This probably wasn't all that helpful but it's what i got lol. Oh and take your time gang, no rush.
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MrDerp1

Anybody else getting comments basically worshipping your story, then offering to create some kind of comic or visual representation of it?
          
          I've been getting a lot of those recently. They'll follow you, then say a bunch of nice things about your story before giving you a discord name to reach out to, offering to create a comic or something for your story. I know what they're trying to do, but I'm curious if anybody else have seen this.

flamejames14

@MrDerp1 dude ik ive seen this so much but i rlly wish it would happen, a visual repentastion would be fuckinf sick but problems are with this book like chapter one were we get Y/N as name but luckily leo is for this but it jst puts plugs in the story
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cartoonmp

Know a guy, that was a target. His ass nearly got scammed.
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MrVoidGuy

@MrDerp1 The amount I got for my Zeezi x male reader book is insane. You're not alone
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flamejames14

Well, heya and my gosh Mr derp u have been grinding dude but i am back to check up on u and your still posting peak and now to read all of this stuff and Mr derp PLEASE don't give up on this story i will be very sad and will have to end your family  but yes im back and a sick game you guys should play is TBOI

flamejames14

@flamejames14 30 dollars for multiplayer is insane, im so excited for what they do and they BETTER not fricking deep fry it
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MrDerp1

@flamejames14 I was wondering about you. Welcome back. I do not plan to quit writing this story any time soon. Especially since we really haven't even started it yet. All of this has just been the build up. I'll have to try to find that game when I have time. I, personally, have been excited for the release of Subnautica 2.
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MrDerp1

Happy Easter! I don't really have much planned for today other than a non-Easter related pixel art drawing I did today as my profile background for right now.
          
          I've made better progress with the next chapter for Storm Rising. The chapter name will most likely be titled, "Dread." But that is subject to change.
          
          Stay safe fellas!

MrDerp1

Here's a short, funny story from me, a dude with dyslexia.
          
          I decided to watch a video titled, "Your life as every Bank on the FBI most wanted list." I figured it might be nice to see what that's like, so I decided to watch it.
          
          The only problem is that I didn't quite understand the title, so before watching the video, I reread the title several times to try to understand it. And every single time I somehow missed the fact that it didn't say, "Bank." It said, "Rank." And I swore it didn't say that before.
          
          This is why I always appreciate it when you guys comment on typos I make. Because even if I read over one paragraph in my story, which I often do when writing, I can still very well miss an obvious typo.
          
          Okay! Bye bye for now!

flamejames14

@MrDerp1 lol i once forget were i put my chips and it was on my keyboard
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Doomslayer656

@MrDerp1 you just like me for real 
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MrDerp1

@MrDerp1 Strange video by the way.
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