Mr Eden Fear

So I may have done a dumb thing. I wrote my first ever rap. I avoid this kind of thing because I really feel that this is not my turf.
          
          I am not sure why I wrote it, this is not something I do or have any real interest in. I am however interested if anyone with knowledge of this subject matter has any critique that would be useful.
          
          "A Description of I" is in "Throw Away Words" if you fancy a gander.
          
          Be seeing you!
          
          - Eden

Apparently I have 10 followers. You strange, deluded, lucky people.  So I thought I would treat you to some insight.
          
          Since I am getting old now I have decided that I am trying to find a little more focus  in my work. So with that in mind, I am starting a few  more projects to hinder any chance of that possibility.
          
          Soft Curses of Angels Vol 4 - This will be my miscellaneous depository for  poems I write as part of my ongoing anthology a.k.a. my life. As pretentious as that sounds, it is.
          
          Screen Static - I like a lot of TV, Film, Games, Stage shows etc. which I often don't write about as I like to keep my work as non derivative as possible.  This of course is a restriction imposed on myself by myself. So I will put anything related to things like pop culture in here.
          
          The Major Arcana  - I have yet to put any ink to paper on this yet but I intend to write a poem for my interpretation of each of the tarot major arcana. I like the idea, but don't want to force it.
          
          Aren't you glad you follow me now? Smiles all-round. 
          
          Be seeing you!
          
          - Eden